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I've listed this article for peer review because Ive largely expanded the article. The article was never before assessed, so I want to know how to improve it. Ill appreciate any comments!
Thanks, Lourie Pieterse ( talk) 08:48, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: I stopped reviewing about two-thirds of the way through because of the many serious violations of WP:NPOV. Much of the article reads like advertising copy written by either the manufacturer or a true enthusiast with a strong pro-Gumpert bias. To make this into a valid encyclopedia article, you need to focus on supportable facts and to avoid inserting opinions and rah-rah stuff. Please read the NPOV page and revise to include only what can be supported by reliable sources. I'd be happy to take another look at the article after you re-work it with neutrality in mind.
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I hope these brief suggestions prove helpful. Finetooth ( talk) 18:14, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments
I hope this helps, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 20:03, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because Ive largely expanded the article. The article was never before assessed, so I want to know how to improve it. Ill appreciate any comments!
Thanks, Lourie Pieterse ( talk) 08:48, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: I stopped reviewing about two-thirds of the way through because of the many serious violations of WP:NPOV. Much of the article reads like advertising copy written by either the manufacturer or a true enthusiast with a strong pro-Gumpert bias. To make this into a valid encyclopedia article, you need to focus on supportable facts and to avoid inserting opinions and rah-rah stuff. Please read the NPOV page and revise to include only what can be supported by reliable sources. I'd be happy to take another look at the article after you re-work it with neutrality in mind.
Lead
History
Development
Availability
I hope these brief suggestions prove helpful. Finetooth ( talk) 18:14, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments
I hope this helps, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 20:03, 21 January 2009 (UTC)