The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and may or may not be accurate for the article in question (due to possible javascript errors/uniqueness of articles).
Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space - between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.
Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) maybe too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
WP:SS.
As Andy suggests, it can be improved by removing excessive links to solitary years. This is easy with a single click on a 'dates' tab that in edit mode. You can then accept or reject the changes offered and/or do more editing before pressing 'Save'. Simply copy the entire contents of
User:Bobblewik/monobook.js to your own monobook. Then follow the instructions in your monobook to clear the cache (i.e. press Ctrl-Shift-R in Firefox, or Ctrl-F5 in IE) before it will work.
bobblewik16:52, 20 June 2006 (UTC)reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and may or may not be accurate for the article in question (due to possible javascript errors/uniqueness of articles).
Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space - between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.
Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) maybe too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
WP:SS.
As Andy suggests, it can be improved by removing excessive links to solitary years. This is easy with a single click on a 'dates' tab that in edit mode. You can then accept or reject the changes offered and/or do more editing before pressing 'Save'. Simply copy the entire contents of
User:Bobblewik/monobook.js to your own monobook. Then follow the instructions in your monobook to clear the cache (i.e. press Ctrl-Shift-R in Firefox, or Ctrl-F5 in IE) before it will work.
bobblewik16:52, 20 June 2006 (UTC)reply