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01:29, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
I hope I don't sound too critical in this review. This is an important subject & worth the effort. And I felt this article does an acceptable job in many of the sections. But if you want to know where to start to improve this article, & make it better than what the Encyclopedia Britannica has on it, these are the places where I would start. -- llywrch ( talk) 22:47, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
A few general ideas. First, I think it might make sense to combine some of the short sections. Perhaps a first section on "Epiphanius and the Ebionites" might work, which could discuss the relevant information about Ebionites and Epiphanius together. It might also include some of the other material from Epiphanius about the Ebionites, particularly if that information can be seen to be linked, even indirectly, to one or more of the quotations. This might be followed by a section on the quotes themselves, perhaps with subsections ("defined" subsections or as separate paragraphs) which would include the original quote(s) and any hypotheses or speculations which might be related to them. The question regarding the identity with other gospels seems to me, at least, right now, to be fairly clearly that the various gospels which had previously been potentially identified as the same maybe/probably are not identical. If that is the case, then that information could be a separate section to follow, as it is less clearly related to the text per se but rather to later ideas about it. Other more recent speculations about the work could be included in the same section. John Carter ( talk) 17:30, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get it ready for GAC. Please review the entire article for completeness, consistency, verifiability, NPOV, and adherence to the Manual of Style. Thanks for all your hard work in helping to improve the article!
Ovadyah (
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01:29, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
I hope I don't sound too critical in this review. This is an important subject & worth the effort. And I felt this article does an acceptable job in many of the sections. But if you want to know where to start to improve this article, & make it better than what the Encyclopedia Britannica has on it, these are the places where I would start. -- llywrch ( talk) 22:47, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
A few general ideas. First, I think it might make sense to combine some of the short sections. Perhaps a first section on "Epiphanius and the Ebionites" might work, which could discuss the relevant information about Ebionites and Epiphanius together. It might also include some of the other material from Epiphanius about the Ebionites, particularly if that information can be seen to be linked, even indirectly, to one or more of the quotations. This might be followed by a section on the quotes themselves, perhaps with subsections ("defined" subsections or as separate paragraphs) which would include the original quote(s) and any hypotheses or speculations which might be related to them. The question regarding the identity with other gospels seems to me, at least, right now, to be fairly clearly that the various gospels which had previously been potentially identified as the same maybe/probably are not identical. If that is the case, then that information could be a separate section to follow, as it is less clearly related to the text per se but rather to later ideas about it. Other more recent speculations about the work could be included in the same section. John Carter ( talk) 17:30, 26 March 2011 (UTC)