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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to take this article to FAC at some point, and am looking for comments pertaining to prose, polish, comprehensiveness, and the ability of it to be understood by non-specialists.
Thanks, Ealdgyth - Talk 14:25, 12 May 2011 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: I always find your articles interesting even though I come at them with next to no background (except what I've gleaned from reading your other work). Here are a few thoughts and suggestions.
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Early life and chancellor
Bishop of Hereford
Archbishop
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider commenting on any other article at WP:PR. I don't usually watch the PR archives or make follow-up comments. If my suggestions are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth ( talk) 18:21, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to take this article to FAC at some point, and am looking for comments pertaining to prose, polish, comprehensiveness, and the ability of it to be understood by non-specialists.
Thanks, Ealdgyth - Talk 14:25, 12 May 2011 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: I always find your articles interesting even though I come at them with next to no background (except what I've gleaned from reading your other work). Here are a few thoughts and suggestions.
Lead
Early life and chancellor
Bishop of Hereford
Archbishop
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider commenting on any other article at WP:PR. I don't usually watch the PR archives or make follow-up comments. If my suggestions are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth ( talk) 18:21, 19 May 2011 (UTC)