I would like this review so it could become an FA. So just give me all the "review" status information, and I will fix it up. :) --
Shane(
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03:55, 24 May 2006 (UTC)reply
Per
WP:MOS, the first letters of words in heading should not be capitalized unless: 1) it is a
proper noun or 2) it is the first word of the heading. (Note that "Directors" should not be capitalized, which is also done a couple of times in the prose also)
Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article. (Here, "Other Facts")
Please provide
WP:CITE information for references/footnotes. See also
WP:CITE/ES; templates like {{
Cite web}} and {{
Cite book}} may be useful here.
This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <div class="references-small"><references/></div>.
The article has a few or too many inline external links, which hamper the readibility of the article. Please convert them to
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA.
Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
This article is a bit list-weighty; in other words, some of the lists should be converted to prose (paragraph form).
There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged. For example, Personnel is/are a bit short.
There are several paragraphs that are too short, which sometimes disrupts the flow of the article. These should either be expanded or merged.
Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE,
years, decades, and centuries without full dates generally should not be linked. For example, January2006 should not be linked, instead change it to January 2006. Also, please note
WP:BTW and
WP:CONTEXT, which state that years with full dates should be linked. For example, February 28, 2006, should be come February 28,
2006.
There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
The FBI Lab is considered to be a leading forensic laboratory, in global terms
is/are weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations.
I would like this review so it could become an FA. So just give me all the "review" status information, and I will fix it up. :) --
Shane(
T -
C -
E) (S/At)
03:55, 24 May 2006 (UTC)reply
Per
WP:MOS, the first letters of words in heading should not be capitalized unless: 1) it is a
proper noun or 2) it is the first word of the heading. (Note that "Directors" should not be capitalized, which is also done a couple of times in the prose also)
Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article. (Here, "Other Facts")
Please provide
WP:CITE information for references/footnotes. See also
WP:CITE/ES; templates like {{
Cite web}} and {{
Cite book}} may be useful here.
This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <div class="references-small"><references/></div>.
The article has a few or too many inline external links, which hamper the readibility of the article. Please convert them to
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA.
Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
This article is a bit list-weighty; in other words, some of the lists should be converted to prose (paragraph form).
There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged. For example, Personnel is/are a bit short.
There are several paragraphs that are too short, which sometimes disrupts the flow of the article. These should either be expanded or merged.
Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE,
years, decades, and centuries without full dates generally should not be linked. For example, January2006 should not be linked, instead change it to January 2006. Also, please note
WP:BTW and
WP:CONTEXT, which state that years with full dates should be linked. For example, February 28, 2006, should be come February 28,
2006.
There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
The FBI Lab is considered to be a leading forensic laboratory, in global terms
is/are weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations.