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I've listed this article for peer review because it recently passed GA and I want to have a final polishing off before I submit this to FAC. It has been mentioned that this needs a good copyedit, so I think this is the place to address that.
Thanks, --I'm an Editor of the wiki citation needed 20:30, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
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Brianboulton (
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13:15, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
I'll try to make some further helpful comments on the rest of the text, but I'd like to wait for the copyedit. Brianboulton ( talk) 22:15, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because it recently passed GA and I want to have a final polishing off before I submit this to FAC. It has been mentioned that this needs a good copyedit, so I think this is the place to address that.
Thanks, --I'm an Editor of the wiki citation needed 20:30, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
Comments on the lead
{{
cite web}}
: |first=
has generic name (
help). There's no requirement from
WP:CITE to use the cite web template, but you do so elsewhere in the article and there should be consistency.
Brianboulton (
talk)
13:15, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
I'll try to make some further helpful comments on the rest of the text, but I'd like to wait for the copyedit. Brianboulton ( talk) 22:15, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
Comments from Ealdgyth ( talk · contribs)