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I've listed this article for peer review as a way of preparing it for FA candidacy. The page has been substantially improved in the past few weeks, with new sections and subsections added, improved text and new images included. In addition, an extensive list of in-line references has been added. However, scrutiny from more experienced editors is needed to understand what else should be changed for the article to meet the requirements of a FA.
Thanks, Barbara Ferreira (writing on behalf of Lars Lindberg Christensen, director of ESO's education and public outreach department) Lars Lindberg Christensen ( talk) 14:37, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
Review from Ruslik0:
The article generally is not so bad, but some problems remain. (I have read only around one third of it.)
More to follow. Ruslik_ Zero 17:19, 17 May 2011 (UTC)
I copy-edited parts of the article. I also advise you to reduce the number sentences like VLT contributes greatly to making ESO the most productive ground-based observatory in the world. as the article should be written in the dry encyclopedic style avoiding too much praise. Ruslik_ Zero 19:21, 18 May 2011 (UTC) SOLVED Lars Lindberg Christensen ( talk) 15:54, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
Review from Iridia:
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review as a way of preparing it for FA candidacy. The page has been substantially improved in the past few weeks, with new sections and subsections added, improved text and new images included. In addition, an extensive list of in-line references has been added. However, scrutiny from more experienced editors is needed to understand what else should be changed for the article to meet the requirements of a FA.
Thanks, Barbara Ferreira (writing on behalf of Lars Lindberg Christensen, director of ESO's education and public outreach department) Lars Lindberg Christensen ( talk) 14:37, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
Review from Ruslik0:
The article generally is not so bad, but some problems remain. (I have read only around one third of it.)
More to follow. Ruslik_ Zero 17:19, 17 May 2011 (UTC)
I copy-edited parts of the article. I also advise you to reduce the number sentences like VLT contributes greatly to making ESO the most productive ground-based observatory in the world. as the article should be written in the dry encyclopedic style avoiding too much praise. Ruslik_ Zero 19:21, 18 May 2011 (UTC) SOLVED Lars Lindberg Christensen ( talk) 15:54, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
Review from Iridia: