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I've listed this article for peer review because…
This article has not yet been edited by anyone other than the author. I believe the content is sufficient and valid, but it could use a second opinion!
Thanks, Hkkelly ( talk) 23:46, 7 September 2016 (UTC)
- Sorry for the late review User:Hkkelly. There were some issues about this article that motivated me to write:
- First of all, avoid Carson Creek Ranch's reference and move it to external links.
- Secondly, add refrences to every section. You might also remove the reference from the lead per WP:Lead
- Lastly, this might be the most difficult but can you create an "origins section"?
Other than that, I think the article could become a GA once its issues are solved. Good luck. Also, if you have free time, could you check my own peer review? Regards. Tintor2 ( talk) 14:18, 8 November 2016 (UTC)
Euphoria Festival
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I've listed this article for peer review because…
This article has not yet been edited by anyone other than the author. I believe the content is sufficient and valid, but it could use a second opinion!
Thanks, Hkkelly ( talk) 23:46, 7 September 2016 (UTC)
- Sorry for the late review User:Hkkelly. There were some issues about this article that motivated me to write:
- First of all, avoid Carson Creek Ranch's reference and move it to external links.
- Secondly, add refrences to every section. You might also remove the reference from the lead per WP:Lead
- Lastly, this might be the most difficult but can you create an "origins section"?
Other than that, I think the article could become a GA once its issues are solved. Good luck. Also, if you have free time, could you check my own peer review? Regards. Tintor2 ( talk) 14:18, 8 November 2016 (UTC)