This has been suggested to be put under peer review to organize what info there is in the article. The WikiProject Inheritance Trilogy will hopefully put this up for FAC when a little better written. There are no specifics on what to be suggested here; just anything that will help.
Icelandic Hurricane #12(talk)00:24, 27 May 2006 (UTC)reply
Needs more references to each of the press releases and reviews. As for the plot synopsis, I'll improve on that with references (I had originally written it :) Also, the characters section needs to be reorganized; it doesn't look too good or appealing, maybe an infobox?--May the Force be with you!
Shreshth91($ |-| ŗ 3 $ |-| ţ |-|)10:14, 27 May 2006 (UTC)reply
It definitely needs more references. :) Also, the introduction needs to be much longer; other FAs have intros that are sometimes three and four large paragraphs in length. Also, is all the information about publication in other countries necessary? «Amina . skywalker(¿Hábleme?)13:06, 27 May 2006 (UTC)reply
Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
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WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. (it should be 2-3 paragraphs, with more content than just a sentence each)
This article may be a bit list-weighty; in other words, some of the lists should be converted to prose (paragraph form).
The article will need references. See
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Please provide
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Cite web}} and {{
Cite book}} may be useful here.
This article needs
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Per
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years, decades, and centuries without full dates generally should not be linked. For example, January2006 should not be linked, instead change it to January 2006. Also, please note
WP:BTW and
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In response to AndyZ's bullet point about date links. This can be done easily using a 'dates' tab in edit mode. Simply copy the entire contents of
User:Bobblewik/monobook.js to your own monobook. You will also get a 'units' tab. Hope that helps.
bobblewik19:28, 28 May 2006 (UTC)reply
This has been suggested to be put under peer review to organize what info there is in the article. The WikiProject Inheritance Trilogy will hopefully put this up for FAC when a little better written. There are no specifics on what to be suggested here; just anything that will help.
Icelandic Hurricane #12(talk)00:24, 27 May 2006 (UTC)reply
Needs more references to each of the press releases and reviews. As for the plot synopsis, I'll improve on that with references (I had originally written it :) Also, the characters section needs to be reorganized; it doesn't look too good or appealing, maybe an infobox?--May the Force be with you!
Shreshth91($ |-| ŗ 3 $ |-| ţ |-|)10:14, 27 May 2006 (UTC)reply
It definitely needs more references. :) Also, the introduction needs to be much longer; other FAs have intros that are sometimes three and four large paragraphs in length. Also, is all the information about publication in other countries necessary? «Amina . skywalker(¿Hábleme?)13:06, 27 May 2006 (UTC)reply
Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. (it should be 2-3 paragraphs, with more content than just a sentence each)
This article may be a bit list-weighty; in other words, some of the lists should be converted to prose (paragraph form).
The article will need references. See
WP:CITE and
WP:V for more information.
Please provide
WP:CITE information for references/footnotes. See also
WP:CITE/ES; templates like {{
Cite web}} and {{
Cite book}} may be useful here.
This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <div class="references-small"><references/></div>.
Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE,
years, decades, and centuries without full dates generally should not be linked. For example, January2006 should not be linked, instead change it to January 2006. Also, please note
WP:BTW and
WP:CONTEXT, which state that years with full dates should be linked. For example, February 28, 2006, should be come February 28,
2006.
Per
WP:MOSNUM, at
Units of measurement, numbers with
SI units of measure should have conversions in
US customary units and vice versa. These conversions should keep to similar values of precision. For example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth". Note that the converted unit of measure uses a standard abbreviation, while the source unit is spelled out in the text.
In response to AndyZ's bullet point about date links. This can be done easily using a 'dates' tab in edit mode. Simply copy the entire contents of
User:Bobblewik/monobook.js to your own monobook. You will also get a 'units' tab. Hope that helps.
bobblewik19:28, 28 May 2006 (UTC)reply