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I've listed this article for peer review because… it has been expanded and restructured ready to be sent for GAN. The editors would like feedback from a "fresh pair of eyes" on any further improvements that are needed, please.
Thanks, Harkey ( talk) 10:15, 23 October 2009 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This is generally well-written and certainly broad in coverage, nicely illustrated, and stable. I have a few suggestions for further improvement.
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I hope these few suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog. That is where I found this one. Finetooth ( talk) 18:56, 3 November 2009 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because… it has been expanded and restructured ready to be sent for GAN. The editors would like feedback from a "fresh pair of eyes" on any further improvements that are needed, please.
Thanks, Harkey ( talk) 10:15, 23 October 2009 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This is generally well-written and certainly broad in coverage, nicely illustrated, and stable. I have a few suggestions for further improvement.
Lead
Arrangement of sections
Abbreviations
Metric conversions
Sourcing
Images
External links
References
I hope these few suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog. That is where I found this one. Finetooth ( talk) 18:56, 3 November 2009 (UTC)