I'm re-writing this whole article to being it to at least GA status. This article is nearly complete (the legacy section still needs a little more expansion) and I'm looking for feedback from another set of eyes as to what needs to be done to bring it to GA level. Thanks! RyguyMN 17:57, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
Your prose needs work. There are a lot of short sentences, much of the article doesn't flow well (reads more like a list of facts), and you should read through for areas where the prose is too informal. With a little rewriting, I think you'll have a good shot, though.
Karanacs 18:36, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
I'm re-writing this whole article to being it to at least GA status. This article is nearly complete (the legacy section still needs a little more expansion) and I'm looking for feedback from another set of eyes as to what needs to be done to bring it to GA level. Thanks! RyguyMN 17:57, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
Your prose needs work. There are a lot of short sentences, much of the article doesn't flow well (reads more like a list of facts), and you should read through for areas where the prose is too informal. With a little rewriting, I think you'll have a good shot, though.
Karanacs 18:36, 11 July 2007 (UTC)