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I've listed this article for peer review because this is my first proper attempt at an article beyond a Start-class and i would just like to see where this could be improved. This has been expanded a lot since its creation a month ago.
Thanks, Simply south ( talk) 20:55, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
An interesting article that I found quite hard to review, as much of the article appeared to be about the railway line rather than the viaduct itself.
I will leave the WP:lead until almost the last.
"The viaduct was built as part GNR's single-track Edgware, Highgate and London Railway line, from Finsbury Park to Edgware via Finchley and Mill Hill, by the contractor Smith, Knight & Co. The line, which was authorised by an Act of Parliament in 1862; and both the line and the viaduct came into use on 22 August 1867.[3]" Although built to carry two tracks, the viaduct initially carried only one.
."The Dollis Valley Greenwalk, a long distance footpath between Moat Mount Open Space in Mill Hill and Hampstead Heath passes (under / alongside / between - whatever is appropriate). It is designed to link many green spaces and wildlife corridors along the way and is approximately 10 miles (16 km) long.[7][8]
... to be continued. Pyrotec ( talk) 21:58, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because this is my first proper attempt at an article beyond a Start-class and i would just like to see where this could be improved. This has been expanded a lot since its creation a month ago.
Thanks, Simply south ( talk) 20:55, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
An interesting article that I found quite hard to review, as much of the article appeared to be about the railway line rather than the viaduct itself.
I will leave the WP:lead until almost the last.
"The viaduct was built as part GNR's single-track Edgware, Highgate and London Railway line, from Finsbury Park to Edgware via Finchley and Mill Hill, by the contractor Smith, Knight & Co. The line, which was authorised by an Act of Parliament in 1862; and both the line and the viaduct came into use on 22 August 1867.[3]" Although built to carry two tracks, the viaduct initially carried only one.
."The Dollis Valley Greenwalk, a long distance footpath between Moat Mount Open Space in Mill Hill and Hampstead Heath passes (under / alongside / between - whatever is appropriate). It is designed to link many green spaces and wildlife corridors along the way and is approximately 10 miles (16 km) long.[7][8]
... to be continued. Pyrotec ( talk) 21:58, 10 June 2009 (UTC)