This has been considerably expanded and cut together from a subsection on the main Doctor Who page, and I intend to send it for FAC in a bit. First, of course, I'd like to get input from non WikiProject Doctor Who people to see if there's anything more we can do with this. It'd be nice to have a Doctor Who FA that is firmly rooted in the real world, so to speak. -- khaosworks ( talk • contribs) 02:38, 8 October 2005 (UTC)
The lead needs wome work to better summarise the article. There several long run-on sentences, like this one
So you should go though the article again- or get someone else to copyedit it- to make sure the flow is good and the sentences digestable. Otherwise it's a great article.-- nixie 04:05, 8 October 2005 (UTC)
This has been considerably expanded and cut together from a subsection on the main Doctor Who page, and I intend to send it for FAC in a bit. First, of course, I'd like to get input from non WikiProject Doctor Who people to see if there's anything more we can do with this. It'd be nice to have a Doctor Who FA that is firmly rooted in the real world, so to speak. -- khaosworks ( talk • contribs) 02:38, 8 October 2005 (UTC)
The lead needs wome work to better summarise the article. There several long run-on sentences, like this one
So you should go though the article again- or get someone else to copyedit it- to make sure the flow is good and the sentences digestable. Otherwise it's a great article.-- nixie 04:05, 8 October 2005 (UTC)