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I've listed this article for peer review because I just made some translations from
ruwiki. I need a general review regarding the grammar and other issues.
Thanks, Ali-al-Bakuvi ( talk) 13:08, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
I've given the article a copy edit for grammar & fluency; it wasn't that bad before, so I hope my edits improved it. There are a few statements, though, that I expect would be flagged as needing citations. -- llywrch ( talk) 16:00, 2 May 2014 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I just made some translations from
ruwiki. I need a general review regarding the grammar and other issues.
Thanks, Ali-al-Bakuvi ( talk) 13:08, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
I've given the article a copy edit for grammar & fluency; it wasn't that bad before, so I hope my edits improved it. There are a few statements, though, that I expect would be flagged as needing citations. -- llywrch ( talk) 16:00, 2 May 2014 (UTC)
Comments by Dudley Miles