I'd like to get this featured - it was tagged with cleanup not so long ago and I worked on it a bit to its current state. What should be done to get it featured? —
Wackymacs 02:11, 27 December 2005 (UTC)reply
Needs a copyedit.
MoS units: 8 MHz --> 8 MHz
Lead needs to be a little longer
Round Rock, Texas, United States --> Round Rock, Texas in the United States
one of the the world's largest computer hardware companies, --> can you get a specific ranking
=Histroy= lacks Dell's expansions. Mention about the company's expansion into major world markets.
Some people believe that --> Weasel phrase used. Should be removed
Dell's international operations seems to be muted.
Avoid fragmenting =Corporate affairs=
=Criticism= should be converted to prose
www.ihatedell.net --> Forum links are not useful; Yellowikis too
Images seem to be lacking. Is it possible to get a free image of Michael Dell? Some non copyrighted images of the headquarters? Take a look at Brihanmumbai Electric Supply and Transport. The =Organisation= anf =Finances= have some great accompanying charts.
Pic of a Dell Machine should be obtained.
The DELL logo should be converted to an SVG image
Images should not be placed at the bottom of a section
Some corporate information such as the company's vision, mission statement and goals would be helpful.
Try and fill up the red links in the article. It looks much neater that way.
I'd like to get this featured - it was tagged with cleanup not so long ago and I worked on it a bit to its current state. What should be done to get it featured? —
Wackymacs 02:11, 27 December 2005 (UTC)reply
Needs a copyedit.
MoS units: 8 MHz --> 8 MHz
Lead needs to be a little longer
Round Rock, Texas, United States --> Round Rock, Texas in the United States
one of the the world's largest computer hardware companies, --> can you get a specific ranking
=Histroy= lacks Dell's expansions. Mention about the company's expansion into major world markets.
Some people believe that --> Weasel phrase used. Should be removed
Dell's international operations seems to be muted.
Avoid fragmenting =Corporate affairs=
=Criticism= should be converted to prose
www.ihatedell.net --> Forum links are not useful; Yellowikis too
Images seem to be lacking. Is it possible to get a free image of Michael Dell? Some non copyrighted images of the headquarters? Take a look at Brihanmumbai Electric Supply and Transport. The =Organisation= anf =Finances= have some great accompanying charts.
Pic of a Dell Machine should be obtained.
The DELL logo should be converted to an SVG image
Images should not be placed at the bottom of a section
Some corporate information such as the company's vision, mission statement and goals would be helpful.
Try and fill up the red links in the article. It looks much neater that way.