This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I feel there are more things to be done which I can't see for now. After which, I will pass the article to FAC.
Thanks, -- Efe ( talk) 12:03, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
Comments from Ealdgyth ( talk · contribs)
Ruhrfisch comments: Very briefly, here are some suggestions for improvement. If you want more comments, please ask here.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 02:04, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I feel there are more things to be done which I can't see for now. After which, I will pass the article to FAC.
Thanks, -- Efe ( talk) 12:03, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
Comments from Ealdgyth ( talk · contribs)
Ruhrfisch comments: Very briefly, here are some suggestions for improvement. If you want more comments, please ask here.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 02:04, 30 July 2008 (UTC)