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Hello all, I have just created this article and I would appreciate any suggestions on how to improve it.
Thanks, -- Midgrid (talk) 22:43, 31 October 2009 (UTC)
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field of {{
Citation}} and point to the book on Google Books i.e. |url=
http://books.google.com/books?id=gjnG3j5hOEwC&pg=PA105
where &PA### is the page number. Except in cases where the page you cite is not available, such as
page 124 for example.<ref name=unraced>{{cite book|last=Collins|first=Sam|title=Unraced...Formula One's lost cars|chapter=DAMS GD-01|publisher=Veloce Publishing|year=2007|pages=8-14, 122 |isbn=978-18458-4084-6}}</ref>
and then for each inline citation, use superscript to give the specific page number, like <ref name=unraced/>p. 14. I saw this done on a recent Featured Article; I'll point it out if I can remember which one.The linked article says F1 is the premier class, but this gives you a little clue without having to click on the link. Another example:The DAMS GD-01 was an unraced Formula One (F1) car used by the French motorsport team, Driot-Arnoux Motor Sport (DAMS). The GD-01 was designed and built by a collaboration of DAMS and Reynard engineers from 1994 to 1995, and was intended to establish the team—which had achieved considerable success in lower categories—in Formula One, the premier FIA class. But a continuing lack of finance meant that the team never entered the championship, despite completing construction of the chassis and conducting some testing.
Might do the same for a few more opaque terms, like Elf fuel, etc. It has Goodyear tires, but what size?It proved to be off the pace due to its cautious bodywork and aerodynamic design, indicating that it would need a thorough development programme in order for it to compete effectively in Formula One, particularly with the introduction of the 107% rule, which eliminated drivers too far behind the pace of the pole position, for the 1996 season.
Interesting article! Note that I am deliberately picky with my reviews, and the issues I raise are not necessarily problems I had, but are things which could create trouble in the future, depending on where you want to go with the article.
Just those little niggles. Aptery gial 07:26, 8 November 2009 (UTC)
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Hello all, I have just created this article and I would appreciate any suggestions on how to improve it.
Thanks, -- Midgrid (talk) 22:43, 31 October 2009 (UTC)
|url=
field of {{
Citation}} and point to the book on Google Books i.e. |url=
http://books.google.com/books?id=gjnG3j5hOEwC&pg=PA105
where &PA### is the page number. Except in cases where the page you cite is not available, such as
page 124 for example.<ref name=unraced>{{cite book|last=Collins|first=Sam|title=Unraced...Formula One's lost cars|chapter=DAMS GD-01|publisher=Veloce Publishing|year=2007|pages=8-14, 122 |isbn=978-18458-4084-6}}</ref>
and then for each inline citation, use superscript to give the specific page number, like <ref name=unraced/>p. 14. I saw this done on a recent Featured Article; I'll point it out if I can remember which one.The linked article says F1 is the premier class, but this gives you a little clue without having to click on the link. Another example:The DAMS GD-01 was an unraced Formula One (F1) car used by the French motorsport team, Driot-Arnoux Motor Sport (DAMS). The GD-01 was designed and built by a collaboration of DAMS and Reynard engineers from 1994 to 1995, and was intended to establish the team—which had achieved considerable success in lower categories—in Formula One, the premier FIA class. But a continuing lack of finance meant that the team never entered the championship, despite completing construction of the chassis and conducting some testing.
Might do the same for a few more opaque terms, like Elf fuel, etc. It has Goodyear tires, but what size?It proved to be off the pace due to its cautious bodywork and aerodynamic design, indicating that it would need a thorough development programme in order for it to compete effectively in Formula One, particularly with the introduction of the 107% rule, which eliminated drivers too far behind the pace of the pole position, for the 1996 season.
Interesting article! Note that I am deliberately picky with my reviews, and the issues I raise are not necessarily problems I had, but are things which could create trouble in the future, depending on where you want to go with the article.
Just those little niggles. Aptery gial 07:26, 8 November 2009 (UTC)