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I've listed this article for peer review because it is a little known subject and very few sources. I managed to get up to GA status, but want to achieve higher. Needs some help with prose and comprehensiveness ... Not contributing, I (and others) can do that, but where it can be improved.
Thanks, The Windler talk 07:10, 10 April 2008 (UTC)
Comments from Ealdgyth ( talk · contribs)
I gather the team was short lived, but the article relies on a lot of jargon that non-rugby players simply won't understand. It feels incomplete, and now the feeling is it is just mainly a list of the games they played.
Ruhrfisch comments: I agree with Ealdgyth's comments - here are a few more suggestions for improvement.
Hope this helps, interesting start but it has some work to get to GA and more to FA, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 04:31, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because it is a little known subject and very few sources. I managed to get up to GA status, but want to achieve higher. Needs some help with prose and comprehensiveness ... Not contributing, I (and others) can do that, but where it can be improved.
Thanks, The Windler talk 07:10, 10 April 2008 (UTC)
Comments from Ealdgyth ( talk · contribs)
I gather the team was short lived, but the article relies on a lot of jargon that non-rugby players simply won't understand. It feels incomplete, and now the feeling is it is just mainly a list of the games they played.
Ruhrfisch comments: I agree with Ealdgyth's comments - here are a few more suggestions for improvement.
Hope this helps, interesting start but it has some work to get to GA and more to FA, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 04:31, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
Suggestions from Semi-Automated Bot put here by SpecialWindler for better access.