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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to know how I can improve this article to hopefully get it up to Good Article status
Thanks, Xx78900 ( talk) 14:37, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
I'm really sorry for getting to this late, there's been a lot going on lately so I haven't managed to have time until now. Overall I'd say the article is pretty complete, and I don't see any major missing components. I have some content-related comments below, but I can also provide a more detailed prose review afterward. Zetana ( talk) 07:50, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
Cork Courthouse is located on Washington Street, a street in central Cork, Ireland. It is adjacent to [X and Y Notable Buildings]; the St Augustine's Catholic Church is on the same street, 100ft southis what I'm thinking of. Just to give the reader some idea of where it is.
As a result, most surviving primary sources relating to the history of the courthouse tend to have partisan biases.This part is a bit confusing for me to read, particularly as it implies the lost records were non-partisan. I'm not sure if I'm explaining this well, but if you read that sentence without
As a resultperhaps you will see what I mean. Secondly, though the surviving records are partisan, why is that important? How did that affect how historians interpreted contemporary records of the courthouse's history, or something along those lines?
A competition for design was held in 1830...Could some more currency conversions (besides the
£22,000 (equal to roughly €3.4 million in 2021)at the end) be provided here for the premiums/contract payment? In similar fashion,
The eventual cost of rebuilding was £27,000later on in the "19th century" section.
Unlike the rest of the building, the original portico survived the fire.Is it that only the portico survived the fire, or that parts of the building, including the portico, survived?
The courthouse was closed in 1999 due to its poor condition.What was used as a replacement courthouse while it was being refurbished?
Although criminal cases have been heard at the new Anglesea Street courthouse since May 2018, civil cases continue to be heard in Washington Street.This sentence is a bit confusing, because it wasn't established before that the courthouse served specifically criminal and/or civil cases. In the sense that it's implied, that's alright (since it's a courthouse), however I'd like to clarify if this means that a) civil and criminal cases were heard at Cork Courthouse before its 1999 closure, and b) after re-opening, criminal cases were transferred to Anglesea Street courthouse?
Let me know if I'm not explaining my comments very well and I'll try to clear them up. Zetana ( talk) 07:57, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
@ Xx78900: are you finished with the above comments? If so, can you ping Zetana? If you are not interested in getting more comments, can you close this PR? Z1720 ( talk) 14:59, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to know how I can improve this article to hopefully get it up to Good Article status
Thanks, Xx78900 ( talk) 14:37, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
I'm really sorry for getting to this late, there's been a lot going on lately so I haven't managed to have time until now. Overall I'd say the article is pretty complete, and I don't see any major missing components. I have some content-related comments below, but I can also provide a more detailed prose review afterward. Zetana ( talk) 07:50, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
Cork Courthouse is located on Washington Street, a street in central Cork, Ireland. It is adjacent to [X and Y Notable Buildings]; the St Augustine's Catholic Church is on the same street, 100ft southis what I'm thinking of. Just to give the reader some idea of where it is.
As a result, most surviving primary sources relating to the history of the courthouse tend to have partisan biases.This part is a bit confusing for me to read, particularly as it implies the lost records were non-partisan. I'm not sure if I'm explaining this well, but if you read that sentence without
As a resultperhaps you will see what I mean. Secondly, though the surviving records are partisan, why is that important? How did that affect how historians interpreted contemporary records of the courthouse's history, or something along those lines?
A competition for design was held in 1830...Could some more currency conversions (besides the
£22,000 (equal to roughly €3.4 million in 2021)at the end) be provided here for the premiums/contract payment? In similar fashion,
The eventual cost of rebuilding was £27,000later on in the "19th century" section.
Unlike the rest of the building, the original portico survived the fire.Is it that only the portico survived the fire, or that parts of the building, including the portico, survived?
The courthouse was closed in 1999 due to its poor condition.What was used as a replacement courthouse while it was being refurbished?
Although criminal cases have been heard at the new Anglesea Street courthouse since May 2018, civil cases continue to be heard in Washington Street.This sentence is a bit confusing, because it wasn't established before that the courthouse served specifically criminal and/or civil cases. In the sense that it's implied, that's alright (since it's a courthouse), however I'd like to clarify if this means that a) civil and criminal cases were heard at Cork Courthouse before its 1999 closure, and b) after re-opening, criminal cases were transferred to Anglesea Street courthouse?
Let me know if I'm not explaining my comments very well and I'll try to clear them up. Zetana ( talk) 07:57, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
@ Xx78900: are you finished with the above comments? If so, can you ping Zetana? If you are not interested in getting more comments, can you close this PR? Z1720 ( talk) 14:59, 16 November 2021 (UTC)