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Looking at getting this peer reviewed, as I've expanded it quite a bit and would like some feedback on what else needs improvement, and if anyone sees any glaring issues.
Thanks, DiamondIIIXX ( talk) 00:22, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
Here are some initial comments. In case you haven't seen it already, WikiProject Energy has some featured articles on power plants that you may find helpful to reference, in terms of what kind of information that could be added. The link is here, I think Scout Moor Wind Farm is most relevant as it's the closest in topic to this article.
It is located approximately 175 km north-west of the state capital Brisbane, and 50 kilometres south-west of Kingaroy and 65 km north of Dalby.It's a bit of duplication but that information definitely should be in the body of the article.
In April 2011, some local landholders expressed concerns at a community forum related to health effects and the noise of the wind turbines, some of which would be less than a kilometre from homes.It's a bit out of place in this section; the sentence could be spun off into a new "Response" section or something similar, which contains information about how the project has been received, e.g. politicians, advocates, and in this case local residents.
That's it for now, I may post more comments later if I can figure out how to word them properly. I can also provide a more detailed prose review after any major expansions are complete. Zetana ( talk) 07:38, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
@ DiamondIIIXX: Any progress on the above comments? When you have responded to the comments, please ping Zetana. If the article needs significant improvements, or you don't have time to work on these, can this PR be closed and a new one opened when the above are addressed? Z1720 ( talk) 00:41, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
Hi @ DiamondIIIXX: are you still interested in getting comments for this article? The longer a PR stays open, the less likely the article will receive feedback. If you want more reviews, I suggest posting a request on Wikiprojects this article is part of. If not, can you close this PR? Thanks. Z1720 ( talk) 15:27, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
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Looking at getting this peer reviewed, as I've expanded it quite a bit and would like some feedback on what else needs improvement, and if anyone sees any glaring issues.
Thanks, DiamondIIIXX ( talk) 00:22, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
Here are some initial comments. In case you haven't seen it already, WikiProject Energy has some featured articles on power plants that you may find helpful to reference, in terms of what kind of information that could be added. The link is here, I think Scout Moor Wind Farm is most relevant as it's the closest in topic to this article.
It is located approximately 175 km north-west of the state capital Brisbane, and 50 kilometres south-west of Kingaroy and 65 km north of Dalby.It's a bit of duplication but that information definitely should be in the body of the article.
In April 2011, some local landholders expressed concerns at a community forum related to health effects and the noise of the wind turbines, some of which would be less than a kilometre from homes.It's a bit out of place in this section; the sentence could be spun off into a new "Response" section or something similar, which contains information about how the project has been received, e.g. politicians, advocates, and in this case local residents.
That's it for now, I may post more comments later if I can figure out how to word them properly. I can also provide a more detailed prose review after any major expansions are complete. Zetana ( talk) 07:38, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
@ DiamondIIIXX: Any progress on the above comments? When you have responded to the comments, please ping Zetana. If the article needs significant improvements, or you don't have time to work on these, can this PR be closed and a new one opened when the above are addressed? Z1720 ( talk) 00:41, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
Hi @ DiamondIIIXX: are you still interested in getting comments for this article? The longer a PR stays open, the less likely the article will receive feedback. If you want more reviews, I suggest posting a request on Wikiprojects this article is part of. If not, can you close this PR? Thanks. Z1720 ( talk) 15:27, 14 December 2021 (UTC)