This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because…I need feedback on changes since the last peer review and the progress made. Also if it's worth listing for FAC any time soon. I'd appreciate a complete breakdown of pretty much everything in list format, including spelling mistakes, odd sentences, badly worded sections, ways to improve things etc.
"The company began selling the car" -> "The company began to sell the car..." Done
"engine at €12,590" -> "engine, priced at .." Done
What does "44 mpg-imp" mean to a non-expert?
I believe Miles per gallon is wikilinked in the first few instances, and the following imp is for it being an imperial measurement. Is that what you meant? Thanks ツ Jenova20(
email)15:55, 31 January 2013 (UTC)reply
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because…I need feedback on changes since the last peer review and the progress made. Also if it's worth listing for FAC any time soon. I'd appreciate a complete breakdown of pretty much everything in list format, including spelling mistakes, odd sentences, badly worded sections, ways to improve things etc.
"The company began selling the car" -> "The company began to sell the car..." Done
"engine at €12,590" -> "engine, priced at .." Done
What does "44 mpg-imp" mean to a non-expert?
I believe Miles per gallon is wikilinked in the first few instances, and the following imp is for it being an imperial measurement. Is that what you meant? Thanks ツ Jenova20(
email)15:55, 31 January 2013 (UTC)reply