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I've listed this article for peer review because I feel it really need to be improved. I hope to get it to GA status, but I can't do it by myself. Please look through and give me your thoughts!
Thanks,
Corn.u.co.pia
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01:51, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
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Image:Christinamilain.jpg has no fair use rationale for inclusion in this article. - Removed
Corn.u.co.pia
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01:00, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
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Attend to the warning template, the copyediting issue - if need be, head over to
WP:LOCE . - Done
Corn.u.co.pia ♥
Disc.us.sion
07:54, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
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Year ranges in infobox should use en-dash instead of hyphen per
WP:DASH . ** Done --
Corn.u.co.pia
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06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
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"Milian did commercials" unpleasant reading. ** Done --
Corn.u.co.pia
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06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
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"wasn't" - avoid contractions, so "was not". ** Done --
Corn.u.co.pia
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06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
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"I heard Santa On the Radio." - "I Heard Santa On The Radio". or "I Heard Santa on the Radio" or something else? The current doesn't look right to me! ** Done --
Corn.u.co.pia
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06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
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Acting career section is four short paras, consider merging and improving the prose.
"Dec. 10 — 16 " - 10–16 December at the least... ** Done --
Corn.u.co.pia
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06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
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"who is the ex of her ex, Beau Dozier. " - too casual... More encyclopaedic language needed. ** Done --
Corn.u.co.pia
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06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
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Why text bold in the Singles section? ** Done --
Corn.u.co.pia
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06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
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Films, TV appearances and awards all need citations.
References should use the {{
cite web }} template. - Done
Corn.u.co.pia ♥
Disc.us.sion
07:54, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
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That's a start for you!
The Rambling Man (
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18:13, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
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Please do not use graphics like "Done" to save space. Thanks,
Ruhrfisch
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00:10, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
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