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Chris Byars

I've listed this article for peer review because... I thought the DYK nom might give a sort of review (I'd like to take the article to GAN), but it didn't. Thanks, Mach61 ( talk) 07:06, 16 January 2024 (UTC) reply

Comments from Z1720

Here are some comments after a quick skim:

  • The lead is quite short. It should be a summary of the whole article. If a section has a heading, some information from that heading should be in the article.
  • Keep looking for more sources and information to add to the article. WP:LIBRARY, Google Scholar, archive.org and your local library system will have access to sources that you might be able to use.

I hope this helps. Z1720 ( talk) 18:29, 19 January 2024 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Chris Byars

I've listed this article for peer review because... I thought the DYK nom might give a sort of review (I'd like to take the article to GAN), but it didn't. Thanks, Mach61 ( talk) 07:06, 16 January 2024 (UTC) reply

Comments from Z1720

Here are some comments after a quick skim:

  • The lead is quite short. It should be a summary of the whole article. If a section has a heading, some information from that heading should be in the article.
  • Keep looking for more sources and information to add to the article. WP:LIBRARY, Google Scholar, archive.org and your local library system will have access to sources that you might be able to use.

I hope this helps. Z1720 ( talk) 18:29, 19 January 2024 (UTC) reply


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