Chicago Board of Trade Building
Of all of our successful COTWs, this is probably the best article produced by the WP:CHICOTW. I am considering moving it along to the WP:FAC. I need some feedback on its current state of progress. TonyTheTiger ( talk/ cont/ bio/ tcfkaWCDbwincowtchatlotpsoplrttaDCLaM) 19:22, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. [?]
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done - this pic was sourced from the commons, as were all other pics. pic is in a complete and referenced infobox.
LurkingInChicago 01:36, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
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Gallery of Chicago Board of Trade Building.
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Done.
LurkingInChicago 14:35, 20 June 2007 (UTC)
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- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 03:23, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
Chicago Board of Trade Building
Of all of our successful COTWs, this is probably the best article produced by the WP:CHICOTW. I am considering moving it along to the WP:FAC. I need some feedback on its current state of progress. TonyTheTiger ( talk/ cont/ bio/ tcfkaWCDbwincowtchatlotpsoplrttaDCLaM) 19:22, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. [?]
- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[?]
-
done - this pic was sourced from the commons, as were all other pics. pic is in a complete and referenced infobox.
LurkingInChicago 01:36, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
-
- Avoid including
galleries in articles, as per
Wikipedia:Galleries. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to a separate page, like
Gallery of Chicago Board of Trade Building.
[?] Done
TonyTheTiger (
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c/
bio/
tcfkaWCDbwincowtchatlotpsoplrttaDCLaM) 19:05, 2 July 2007 (UTC)
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 199 meters, use 199 meters, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 199 meters. [?]-
Done.
LurkingInChicago 14:35, 20 June 2007 (UTC)
-
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.
[?] Done mostly using
Conversion templates.
TonyTheTiger (
t/
c/
bio/
tcfkaWCDbwincowtchatlotpsoplrttaDCLaM) 18:03, 25 June 2007 (UTC)
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
[?] Done
TonyTheTiger (
t/
c/
bio/
tcfkaWCDbwincowtchatlotpsoplrttaDCLaM) 00:11, 2 July 2007 (UTC)
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.
[?] Done
TonyTheTiger (
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c/
bio/
tcfkaWCDbwincowtchatlotpsoplrttaDCLaM) 00:15, 2 July 2007 (UTC)
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 03:23, 19 June 2007 (UTC)