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I've listed this article for peer review because… I want to see if it is written well and has all the possible criteria for a FL nomination.

Thanks, Kekkomereq4 ( talk) 18:36, 4 October 2009 (UTC) reply

1. "Commercials" and "Film roles associated with Cher" don't need to be sortable.-- Diaa abdelmoneim ( talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC) reply
   •  Done Kekkomereq4 ( talk) 21:00, 9 October 2009 (UTC) reply
2. You should reduce the Movie information column width in "Film roles associated with Cher", to increase status width
   •  Done Kekkomereq4 ( talk) 21:00, 9 October 2009 (UTC) reply
3. Do u have any references for the commercials?-- Diaa abdelmoneim ( talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC) reply
   • All the videos are available on Youtube. Kekkomereq4 ( talk) 21:00, 9 October 2009 (UTC) reply
4. You have some "Citation needed" tags, please address those.-- Diaa abdelmoneim ( talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC) reply
   •  Done Kekkomereq4 ( talk) 17:59, 14 October 2009 (UTC) reply
5. Change "Movie information" to notes.-- Diaa abdelmoneim ( talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC) reply
   •  Done Kekkomereq4 ( talk) 21:00, 9 October 2009 (UTC) reply
6. The sorting of US BOX Office has problems because of the dashes (When you click four times it stay on the dashes as first). Fix this by adding sort keys.-- Diaa abdelmoneim ( talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC) reply
   •  Done I've removed the dashes Kekkomereq4 ( talk) 20:04, 10 October 2009 (UTC) reply
7. What does # mean in Commercials?-- Diaa abdelmoneim ( talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC) reply
   • The number of the commercials that she's done Kekkomereq4 ( talk) 21:02, 9 October 2009 (UTC) reply

1. Why did u bold the titles on "Film roles associated with Cher" and not the others tables?
   •  Done Kekkomereq4 ( talk) 15:00, 16 October 2009 (UTC) reply
2. Remove "(see below)" from the lead.
   •  Done Kekkomereq4 ( talk) 15:00, 16 October 2009 (UTC) reply
3. Could u have a column in the Filmography table for her role (lead actor, supporting actor, cameo...) in the films?
   •  Done Kekkomereq4 ( talk) 15:28, 16 October 2009 (UTC) reply
4. Burlesque's producer is "Screen Gems".
   •  Done Kekkomereq4 ( talk) 15:00, 16 October 2009 (UTC) reply
5. Find a better reference than "TV interview, The Ellen DeGeneres Show"
   •  Done Kekkomereq4 ( talk) 15:45, 16 October 2009 (UTC) reply
6. "This is a chronological list of films in which Cher has appeared." no need for that
   •  Done Kekkomereq4 ( talk) 15:00, 16 October 2009 (UTC) reply
7. Try to reduce the films mentioned in the lead a bit. Only mention films that are really notable in her career and not every film like the ones in 1987.
8. You need to copy edit the whole lead. You have many sentence structure and grammar problesm. Here are few:
   • Cher has starred in various international television commercials (see below), as well, she was a high profile print advertising for her friend Lori Davis (1992).
   • After in the same year she started her film career with Sonny Bono in the poorly received-movie Good Times[1] and later as a solo actress in the low budget feature Chastity.
   • was a lesbian who worked in at the Kerr-McGee plant in Cimarron, Oklahoma.
   • directed by Peter Bogdanovich and with Eric Stoltz, Sam Elliott and Laura Dern.
   • In particular, Cher, in the lead role, has received positive reviews.
   • During 1989-1991, Cher refused many roles.
   • She was also nominated twice for the Academy Award but she won only one time in 1987 for Best Actress in a Comedy for her role in Moonstruck.