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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to see what it takes to make this a featured article. Specifically, focus on article tone, lede, and summary style.
Thanks, X750. Spin a yarn? Articles I've screwed over? 10:03, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
With the amounts of mechanical grip the car and tires could provide...).
With the amounts of mechanical grip...was shortened or cut. It disrupts the flow b/w the last and 2nd to last sentences, and doesn't add much to conveying ideas (1) and (2). spintheer ( talk) 06:12, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to see what it takes to make this a featured article. Specifically, focus on article tone, lede, and summary style.
Thanks, X750. Spin a yarn? Articles I've screwed over? 10:03, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
With the amounts of mechanical grip the car and tires could provide...).
With the amounts of mechanical grip...was shortened or cut. It disrupts the flow b/w the last and 2nd to last sentences, and doesn't add much to conveying ideas (1) and (2). spintheer ( talk) 06:12, 19 June 2024 (UTC)