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I've listed this article for peer review because while I want to see if improvements can be made to it in order to move it up to at least GA, I'm wondering about the major differences it has compared to some of the other dog breed articles.
For instance, it's health section is massive - should those enormous paragraphs be culled and potentially moved into their own relevant pages?
Also I'm always wondering if a gallery generally has any place in such an article.
Thanks, Miyagawa ( talk) 20:18, 3 November 2009 (UTC)
Hello! This is a very nice start to a dog breed article - and they're such a beautiful dog that it's nice to see their article get some TLC. The first thing I would suggest would be to look at some other recent dog breed GAs, to see if they give you any ideas. None of them are perfect, but they may spark an idea - I'd start with German Shepherd Dog and English Cocker Spaniel. As for specific comments for this article on its way to GA:
I hope the comments above help you in your quest for GA or more. I realize that it may seem like a lot of work to do, but as I said above, this is a really good start on the article. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. I will be watchlisting this page, so either ask me here or on my talk page. Dana boomer ( talk) 22:09, 9 November 2009 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because while I want to see if improvements can be made to it in order to move it up to at least GA, I'm wondering about the major differences it has compared to some of the other dog breed articles.
For instance, it's health section is massive - should those enormous paragraphs be culled and potentially moved into their own relevant pages?
Also I'm always wondering if a gallery generally has any place in such an article.
Thanks, Miyagawa ( talk) 20:18, 3 November 2009 (UTC)
Hello! This is a very nice start to a dog breed article - and they're such a beautiful dog that it's nice to see their article get some TLC. The first thing I would suggest would be to look at some other recent dog breed GAs, to see if they give you any ideas. None of them are perfect, but they may spark an idea - I'd start with German Shepherd Dog and English Cocker Spaniel. As for specific comments for this article on its way to GA:
I hope the comments above help you in your quest for GA or more. I realize that it may seem like a lot of work to do, but as I said above, this is a really good start on the article. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. I will be watchlisting this page, so either ask me here or on my talk page. Dana boomer ( talk) 22:09, 9 November 2009 (UTC)