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I've listed this article for peer review because… I have been working on this article since February of this year, and with much work, it became a good article in April. I would like to continue to work on it and get it to featured article status (FA), but first, I would like to have a peer review done on it to see what areas of the article need to be worked on before it is nominated for FA. Please contribute all comments, questions or opinions; they would be gladly appreciated.
Thanks, Creativity 97 21:03, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
Thank you for your comments, Arre. They help. I'm not quite sure what you mean by the use of the word "and" and commas (", and"), but this article was thoroughly copy-edited a few months ago. A lot has been added since then, but most of the grammar that was corrected still stands. Also, about adding sources for quotes in the lead, do you mean just the reception type quotes (like the one posted from Canyon News) or the characterization type quotes too? Thanks again for your comments, I look forward to anymore you have to add. Creativity 97 16:18, 3 July 2013 (UTC)
I have a few other comments:
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because… I have been working on this article since February of this year, and with much work, it became a good article in April. I would like to continue to work on it and get it to featured article status (FA), but first, I would like to have a peer review done on it to see what areas of the article need to be worked on before it is nominated for FA. Please contribute all comments, questions or opinions; they would be gladly appreciated.
Thanks, Creativity 97 21:03, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
Thank you for your comments, Arre. They help. I'm not quite sure what you mean by the use of the word "and" and commas (", and"), but this article was thoroughly copy-edited a few months ago. A lot has been added since then, but most of the grammar that was corrected still stands. Also, about adding sources for quotes in the lead, do you mean just the reception type quotes (like the one posted from Canyon News) or the characterization type quotes too? Thanks again for your comments, I look forward to anymore you have to add. Creativity 97 16:18, 3 July 2013 (UTC)
I have a few other comments: