This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because it is one of the essential 1,000 articles of Wikipedia, and in contrast to articles such as
Domestic Sheep,
Bird or
Bacteria, it is nowhere near GA or FA standard. I'd like to hear ideas for new sections to be added, details to be polished, and so on.
Thanks, Fish-Bird ( talk) 16:51, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
At this point the article needs a lot of work before it's close to FA or GA status. This isn't a very detailed review, but here are a few ideas of where to start:
That should be enough to keep you busy for awhile. I'd be happy to come back and do a more detailed review at that point. -- JayHenry ( talk) 21:13, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
Here are my points about the article, thinking about how I wrote Domestic sheep.
Overall, It's helpful in sectioning and looking for things to expand, to ask what a reader who didn't know anything about camels would want to know. Examples: what do they eat? what is their behavior and social structure? how big is a camel? what makes a true camel different than other camelids, and what makes camels different from each other? I hope this helps! I'll try and poke around to help you once you go for GA (and beyond?) Steven Walling (talk) 21:42, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because it is one of the essential 1,000 articles of Wikipedia, and in contrast to articles such as
Domestic Sheep,
Bird or
Bacteria, it is nowhere near GA or FA standard. I'd like to hear ideas for new sections to be added, details to be polished, and so on.
Thanks, Fish-Bird ( talk) 16:51, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
At this point the article needs a lot of work before it's close to FA or GA status. This isn't a very detailed review, but here are a few ideas of where to start:
That should be enough to keep you busy for awhile. I'd be happy to come back and do a more detailed review at that point. -- JayHenry ( talk) 21:13, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
Here are my points about the article, thinking about how I wrote Domestic sheep.
Overall, It's helpful in sectioning and looking for things to expand, to ask what a reader who didn't know anything about camels would want to know. Examples: what do they eat? what is their behavior and social structure? how big is a camel? what makes a true camel different than other camelids, and what makes camels different from each other? I hope this helps! I'll try and poke around to help you once you go for GA (and beyond?) Steven Walling (talk) 21:42, 17 January 2009 (UTC)