This is a biographical article which has changed very much over the past 3 months. A lot of content has been added, but perhaps in a manner where it may be confusing to the reader. It would be nice if someone could go through the article and suggest any of the following for improvement:
It would also be great if someone could go through it and make corrections to any of:
Ideally, it would be nice to see this as a featured article someday. Thanks in advance for your help and input - it's very much appreciated! -- HappyCamper 14:01, 2 Jun 2005 (UTC)
There are alot of external links there, choose the ones that you used to write the article and then trim off anything not immediately relevant to the article. You will need to cite your sources and possibly use a footnote system to show which source you used to add facts and opinions, providing you have used neutral sources a good referncing system should also help clear up remaining POV problems. The article could use some more images. How did he get his theories out to the public if not through journals? There should be a list of publications. -- nixie 04:36, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC)
This is a biographical article which has changed very much over the past 3 months. A lot of content has been added, but perhaps in a manner where it may be confusing to the reader. It would be nice if someone could go through the article and suggest any of the following for improvement:
It would also be great if someone could go through it and make corrections to any of:
Ideally, it would be nice to see this as a featured article someday. Thanks in advance for your help and input - it's very much appreciated! -- HappyCamper 14:01, 2 Jun 2005 (UTC)
There are alot of external links there, choose the ones that you used to write the article and then trim off anything not immediately relevant to the article. You will need to cite your sources and possibly use a footnote system to show which source you used to add facts and opinions, providing you have used neutral sources a good referncing system should also help clear up remaining POV problems. The article could use some more images. How did he get his theories out to the public if not through journals? There should be a list of publications. -- nixie 04:36, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC)