My normal area of operations is football articles, but my wife made me promise to work on the article on her hometown in exchange for spending so long on the computer! :-) So I've been hard at work on this for a while now (in comparison, before I first edited it, it looked like this), and would appreciate any input on anything that needs looking at before I put it up for FA......
Thanks,
ChrisTheDude 11:07, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
Your wish is my command - here are some suggestions and things.
That's about it. My review is brief because I didn't read the article in full - I really am not the copyedit type for such long articles (20kb is about my limit :) ). But yeah, I think it'd do OK at an FAC - tell me when it comes, I'd like to support! Dihydrogen Monoxide ( H2O) 08:15, 30 October 2007 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 36km, use 36 km, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 36 km.
[?]You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Dihydrogen Monoxide ( H2O) 08:15, 30 October 2007 (UTC)
My normal area of operations is football articles, but my wife made me promise to work on the article on her hometown in exchange for spending so long on the computer! :-) So I've been hard at work on this for a while now (in comparison, before I first edited it, it looked like this), and would appreciate any input on anything that needs looking at before I put it up for FA......
Thanks,
ChrisTheDude 11:07, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
Your wish is my command - here are some suggestions and things.
That's about it. My review is brief because I didn't read the article in full - I really am not the copyedit type for such long articles (20kb is about my limit :) ). But yeah, I think it'd do OK at an FAC - tell me when it comes, I'd like to support! Dihydrogen Monoxide ( H2O) 08:15, 30 October 2007 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 36km, use 36 km, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 36 km.
[?]You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Dihydrogen Monoxide ( H2O) 08:15, 30 October 2007 (UTC)