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I've listed this article for peer review because the article is headed to
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Imzadi 1979
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Brianboulton comments: Sounds like a place worth visiting. Here are some suggestions:-
"Since it opened, Brockway Mountain Drive has been recognized in several publications and other venues for its scenic nature, dating back to the mid-20th century." To what does "dating back to the mid-20th century" refer? The phrase seems redundant. And I'd say scenic "qualities" rather than "nature"
Would it be possible to add a scale to the map?
The first setence is unnecessary fluff.
I hope that these suggestions are helpful. As I cannot watch individual peer reviews, please contact me via my talkpage if you wish to raise any issues with me, or if you'd like me to take another look. Brianboulton ( talk) 16:18, 12 April 2011 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because the article is headed to
WP:FAC in the near future. I'm looking for a review to find any things that need updating or changing before I make the nomination. Thanks,
Imzadi 1979
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10:51, 1 April 2011 (UTC)
Brianboulton comments: Sounds like a place worth visiting. Here are some suggestions:-
"Since it opened, Brockway Mountain Drive has been recognized in several publications and other venues for its scenic nature, dating back to the mid-20th century." To what does "dating back to the mid-20th century" refer? The phrase seems redundant. And I'd say scenic "qualities" rather than "nature"
Would it be possible to add a scale to the map?
The first setence is unnecessary fluff.
I hope that these suggestions are helpful. As I cannot watch individual peer reviews, please contact me via my talkpage if you wish to raise any issues with me, or if you'd like me to take another look. Brianboulton ( talk) 16:18, 12 April 2011 (UTC)