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I've listed this article for peer review because it is a good article in a strong position, and I'd like to nominate it for featured status soon. I'd like to have it checked to see that it is ready to be nominated and to see what changes might need to be made.
Thanks, Cloudbound ( talk) 21:15, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
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History
Broadly speaking this section if well written, to my mind at FA standard, however it leaves me with one question. What became of British Asia Airways. There's a mention of its formation but none of its subsequent history of current status. Nor is there a link. Done
Corporate Affairs is this the best section for the cargo airline?
Destinations
No issues although most detail is on another page. Would the destination map be better placed here? Done
Fleet I can see no issues with this section. It's perhaps one of the more comprehensively written of such sections. Perhaps this could be used as a model for some airline pages where much information is missing.
Marketing Perhaps I'm not best place to review this section, but no issues stand out to me.
Cabins This seems well written to me, I have no information to the contrary.
Incidents and accidents The only point I'll make here is that the picture used, while of the most recent incident is probably not the most notable. What else is available? Mtaylor848 ( talk) 12:02, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because it is a good article in a strong position, and I'd like to nominate it for featured status soon. I'd like to have it checked to see that it is ready to be nominated and to see what changes might need to be made.
Thanks, Cloudbound ( talk) 21:15, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
Opening statement
History
Broadly speaking this section if well written, to my mind at FA standard, however it leaves me with one question. What became of British Asia Airways. There's a mention of its formation but none of its subsequent history of current status. Nor is there a link. Done
Corporate Affairs is this the best section for the cargo airline?
Destinations
No issues although most detail is on another page. Would the destination map be better placed here? Done
Fleet I can see no issues with this section. It's perhaps one of the more comprehensively written of such sections. Perhaps this could be used as a model for some airline pages where much information is missing.
Marketing Perhaps I'm not best place to review this section, but no issues stand out to me.
Cabins This seems well written to me, I have no information to the contrary.
Incidents and accidents The only point I'll make here is that the picture used, while of the most recent incident is probably not the most notable. What else is available? Mtaylor848 ( talk) 12:02, 14 July 2013 (UTC)