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I've listed this article for peer review because this article has been promoted to GA status since the last time I've put it up for peer review. I'm hoping that, with helpful and constructive criticism, Boeing 767 can be nominated for Featured Article status.
Thanks, Sp33dyphil ( T • C • I love Wikipedia!) 06:49, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: Looks comprehensive to a non-expert (me). The prose is clear though a bit heavy on the passive voice in places. The article is well-illustrated except for layout problems, easily fixable, as noted below. Here are a few comments and suggestions:
Lead
Background
Further developments
Airframe
767-300
Military variants
Specifications
References
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider commenting on any other article at WP:PR. I don't usually watch the PR archives or make follow-up comments. If my suggestions are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth ( talk) 20:02, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because this article has been promoted to GA status since the last time I've put it up for peer review. I'm hoping that, with helpful and constructive criticism, Boeing 767 can be nominated for Featured Article status.
Thanks, Sp33dyphil ( T • C • I love Wikipedia!) 06:49, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: Looks comprehensive to a non-expert (me). The prose is clear though a bit heavy on the passive voice in places. The article is well-illustrated except for layout problems, easily fixable, as noted below. Here are a few comments and suggestions:
Lead
Background
Further developments
Airframe
767-300
Military variants
Specifications
References
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider commenting on any other article at WP:PR. I don't usually watch the PR archives or make follow-up comments. If my suggestions are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth ( talk) 20:02, 5 March 2011 (UTC)