This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because this is going to be a part of a featured topic and I would like some feedback on the writing.
Thanks, — Chris! c t 06:15, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
Comments from Dabomb87 ( talk · contribs) "6-time"-->six-time
Giants2008 comments - My apologies for the delay; it's been a long day for me here. Only a couple of things that stuck out to me, since Dabomb has given this a good review already. To beef up the third paragraph, a sentence on the first winner could be added, like most recently featured lists on sports awards. Also, I think "men's basketball team" can safely be dropped from the Tar Heels, since the first sentence of the lead makes clear that the award is for male players. Giants2008 ( 17-14) 02:59, 10 May 2009 (UTC)
The Rambling Man ( talk) 19:56, 11 May 2009 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because this is going to be a part of a featured topic and I would like some feedback on the writing.
Thanks, — Chris! c t 06:15, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
Comments from Dabomb87 ( talk · contribs) "6-time"-->six-time
Giants2008 comments - My apologies for the delay; it's been a long day for me here. Only a couple of things that stuck out to me, since Dabomb has given this a good review already. To beef up the third paragraph, a sentence on the first winner could be added, like most recently featured lists on sports awards. Also, I think "men's basketball team" can safely be dropped from the Tar Heels, since the first sentence of the lead makes clear that the award is for male players. Giants2008 ( 17-14) 02:59, 10 May 2009 (UTC)
The Rambling Man ( talk) 19:56, 11 May 2009 (UTC)