Hello,
I've listed this article for peer review. I want to eventually get it up to GA-class (as I think it has the potential to be GA), but that would be a first for me, so I honestly don't know exactly what to do to improve the article. Anything would be helpful, especially things like nit-picking the citations or style.
Thanks for hard work on the article! I think it's close to GA. The lede now has one sentence about climate change and ocean acidification, but the rest of the article doesn't contain any information about it. As with moderate to high
warming scenarios, coral reef is expected to disappear almost completely (see for instance IPCC SR15 report), I think this information is vital. Furthermore, the source given doesn't talk about black coral in specific.
Femke Nijsse (
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13:09, 4 November 2019 (UTC)reply
This lede sentence: "Though it has historically been used by pacific peoples as a medical treatment and in rituals, its only current use is making jewelry" needs a more modern source (now 1922).
Femke Nijsse (
talk)
13:18, 4 November 2019 (UTC)reply
Hello,
I've listed this article for peer review. I want to eventually get it up to GA-class (as I think it has the potential to be GA), but that would be a first for me, so I honestly don't know exactly what to do to improve the article. Anything would be helpful, especially things like nit-picking the citations or style.
Thanks for hard work on the article! I think it's close to GA. The lede now has one sentence about climate change and ocean acidification, but the rest of the article doesn't contain any information about it. As with moderate to high
warming scenarios, coral reef is expected to disappear almost completely (see for instance IPCC SR15 report), I think this information is vital. Furthermore, the source given doesn't talk about black coral in specific.
Femke Nijsse (
talk)
13:09, 4 November 2019 (UTC)reply
This lede sentence: "Though it has historically been used by pacific peoples as a medical treatment and in rituals, its only current use is making jewelry" needs a more modern source (now 1922).
Femke Nijsse (
talk)
13:18, 4 November 2019 (UTC)reply