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I've listed this article for peer review because... please see thread about BF43 on WT:FAC.
Thank you for your time & trouble, § Lingzhi ( talk| check refs) 23:54, 28 May 2023 (UTC)
Coming here from WT:FAC. The PR nominator asked for pre-FAC advice, and many comments were about the length. My comments below are going to focus on that concern, but perhaps also focus on the primary source concerns.
I am not a subject matter expert, and I am not interested enough in this topic to do the vast amount of work needed to summarise and trim the article. Can you take a look at the article and do a first pass at trimming, based on some of my suggestions above? It makes my work a lot easier because then I can start taking a look at the kept information. Z1720 ( talk) 13:26, 29 May 2023 (UTC)
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I've listed this article for peer review because... please see thread about BF43 on WT:FAC.
Thank you for your time & trouble, § Lingzhi ( talk| check refs) 23:54, 28 May 2023 (UTC)
Coming here from WT:FAC. The PR nominator asked for pre-FAC advice, and many comments were about the length. My comments below are going to focus on that concern, but perhaps also focus on the primary source concerns.
I am not a subject matter expert, and I am not interested enough in this topic to do the vast amount of work needed to summarise and trim the article. Can you take a look at the article and do a first pass at trimming, based on some of my suggestions above? It makes my work a lot easier because then I can start taking a look at the kept information. Z1720 ( talk) 13:26, 29 May 2023 (UTC)