This article was promoted to GA status a few days ago. I am now looking at the possibility of nominating it as a FAC (surprise, surprise). I understand that there may be stylistic errors, which I will look into. But I am more concerned about substantive issues with the article that may be problematic. Thanks,
Golem88991 17:49, 3 August 2007 (UTC)reply
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This article was promoted to GA status a few days ago. I am now looking at the possibility of nominating it as a FAC (surprise, surprise). I understand that there may be stylistic errors, which I will look into. But I am more concerned about substantive issues with the article that may be problematic. Thanks,
Golem88991 17:49, 3 August 2007 (UTC)reply
Automated Peer Review
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
Avoid including
galleries in articles, as per
Wikipedia:Galleries. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to
wikicommons or integrating images with the text.[?]
Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.[?]
Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.[?]
Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.[?]
The script has spotted the following contractions: don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?]