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I've listed this article for peer review because… I just recently had the article promoted to GA, and I would like to know what I need to do to get it up to Featured Status, if at all possible.
Thanks, A8x (talk) 21:20, 3 August 2010 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: The structural essentials seem to be here, but the prose is not yet of FA quality. Small errors should be fixed, the prose tightened, and the Manual of Style adhered to. I have specific suggestions below, but the main one is to find someone to carefully copyedit the article.
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I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog at WP:PR; that is where I found this one. I don't usually watch the PR archives or check corrections or changes. If my comments are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth ( talk) 19:31, 14 August 2010 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because… I just recently had the article promoted to GA, and I would like to know what I need to do to get it up to Featured Status, if at all possible.
Thanks, A8x (talk) 21:20, 3 August 2010 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: The structural essentials seem to be here, but the prose is not yet of FA quality. Small errors should be fixed, the prose tightened, and the Manual of Style adhered to. I have specific suggestions below, but the main one is to find someone to carefully copyedit the article.
Lead
Gameplay
Singleplayer
Images
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog at WP:PR; that is where I found this one. I don't usually watch the PR archives or check corrections or changes. If my comments are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth ( talk) 19:31, 14 August 2010 (UTC)