Second Peer Review.
Once again, I would like people to comment on thing to improve this article and grade the content value, general interest, etc, anything else that the editors of this article have missed so that we can try for a GA nomination. -- Squilibob 10:39, 24 May 2007 (UTC)
Some of the citations could be more detailed - see WP:CITE#Full citations. I'm also not so sure that you need Image:Azuarticlepic.PNG in the article - the caption and fair use rationale doesn't make enough of a case for me. The lead needs some work - it doesn't summarise the article properly. As a whole, the article seems a bit short. - Malkinann 23:55, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
The more I look at the article, the more I think the adaptations section and the media section could be combined into one section called media. - Malkinann 07:30, 9 June 2007 (UTC)
"Title" seems too short to be a section. Maybe you could turn it into a note, like how the Excel Saga article explains Koushi Rikudou's spelling. I did the same thing for explaining Harlock's name a few weeks back. The stuff about "Azumanga" being used for Kiyohiko Azuma's other works could be moved to his article.-- Nohansen 15:27, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
Second Peer Review.
Once again, I would like people to comment on thing to improve this article and grade the content value, general interest, etc, anything else that the editors of this article have missed so that we can try for a GA nomination. -- Squilibob 10:39, 24 May 2007 (UTC)
Some of the citations could be more detailed - see WP:CITE#Full citations. I'm also not so sure that you need Image:Azuarticlepic.PNG in the article - the caption and fair use rationale doesn't make enough of a case for me. The lead needs some work - it doesn't summarise the article properly. As a whole, the article seems a bit short. - Malkinann 23:55, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
The more I look at the article, the more I think the adaptations section and the media section could be combined into one section called media. - Malkinann 07:30, 9 June 2007 (UTC)
"Title" seems too short to be a section. Maybe you could turn it into a note, like how the Excel Saga article explains Koushi Rikudou's spelling. I did the same thing for explaining Harlock's name a few weeks back. The stuff about "Azumanga" being used for Kiyohiko Azuma's other works could be moved to his article.-- Nohansen 15:27, 10 June 2007 (UTC)