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Requests

Star Fox: Assault

The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
  • Avoid using contractions like (outside of quotations): couldn't.
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR  t 23:43, 30 January 2007 (UTC) reply

ANGI Homeservices

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  • The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article. [?]
  • Consider adding more links to the article; per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006. [?]
  • This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon. [?]
    • I know this is an automated peer review by a bot; but one of the things I'm looking for is suggestions for what to add to the article to make it more comprehensive; what do readers want to know that isn't already specifically stated? ~ ONUnicorn( Talk| Contribs) problem solving
  • There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
    • it has been
    • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment). [?]
      • The specific "it has been" that you mentioned is atributed to the New York Times. There is another instance of weasle wording that the bot missed which has a {{fact}} tag appended to it. One of the problems is that the person who wants that nugget of information in the article can only attribute it to two on-line discussion forums, which in my understanding fail WP:RS. If anyone has suggestions for what to do about this, that's one of the specific things I'm looking for in this peer review. ~ ONUnicorn( Talk| Contribs) problem solving
  • Please provide citations for all of the {{fact}}s. [?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]

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William Goebel

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Campaign history of the Roman military

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  • See if possible if there is a free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article. [?]
  • There may be an applicable infobox for this article. For example, see Template:Infobox Biography, Template:Infobox School, or Template:Infobox City. [?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
  • Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Wikipedia:Summary style. [?]
  • This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, than an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail. [?]
  • There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
    • allege
    • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment). [?]
  • Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: neighbour (B) (American: neighbor), defence (B) (American: defense), organize (A) (British: organise), realize (A) (British: realise), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization).
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
  • Avoid using contractions like (outside of quotations): wasn't.
  • As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2] [?]
  • Please provide citations for all of the {{fact}}s. [?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]

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North Omaha, Nebraska

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Sandugo Festival

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Top Gear

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  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==. [?]
  • There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
    • allege
    • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment). [?]
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
  • Avoid using contractions like (outside of quotations): aren't.
  • Please provide citations for all of the {{fact}}s. [?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR  t 23:43, 30 January 2007 (UTC) reply

Imperial Trans-Antarctic Expedition

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  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. [?]
  • See if possible if there is a free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article. [?]
  • There may be an applicable infobox for this article. For example, see Template:Infobox Biography, Template:Infobox School, or Template:Infobox City. [?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -   between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 20 miles, use 20 miles, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 20 miles. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006. [?]
  • As per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using January 30th was a great day, use January 30 was a great day. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
  • Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article. [?]
  • Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Wikipedia:Guide to layout. [?]
  • There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
    • is considered
    • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment). [?]
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR  t 23:43, 30 January 2007 (UTC) reply

Eskayan

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Characters of The Big O

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  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. [?]
  • Consider adding more links to the article; per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles. [?]
  • See if possible if there is a free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article. [?]
  • There may be an applicable infobox for this article. For example, see Template:Infobox Biography, Template:Infobox School, or Template:Infobox City. [?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -   between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 10 foot, use 10 foot, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 10 foot. [?]
  • This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, than an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail. [?]
  • There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
    • arguably
    • apparently
    • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment). [?]
  • Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: armor (A) (British: armour), harbor (A) (British: harbour), neighbor (A) (British: neighbour), realize (A) (British: realise), realise (B) (American: realize), ization (A) (British: isation), programme (B) (American: program ).
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
  • Avoid using contractions like (outside of quotations): don't, won't, can't, doesn't, don't, doesn't, doesn't, didn't, wouldn't, shouldn't, aren't, weren't, don't, doesn't, didn't, doesn't.
  • As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2] [?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]

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Truman Capote

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  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article. [?]
  • See if possible if there is a free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions. [?]
  • If this article is about a person, please add {{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}} along with the required parameters to the article - see Wikipedia:Persondata for more information. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -   between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 159 cm, use 159 cm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 159 cm. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==. [?]
  • There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
    • allege
    • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment). [?]
  • Avoid using contractions like (outside of quotations): can't, don't, didn't, wasn't, Isn't.
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]

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Double act

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Leonard Orban

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  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. [?]
  • See if possible if there is a free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article. [?]
  • If this article is about a person, please add {{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}} along with the required parameters to the article - see Wikipedia:Persondata for more information. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006. [?]
  • As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2] [?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]

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El Hatillo Municipality, Miranda

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Korona Kielce

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Multimeter

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  • The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article. [?]
  • The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article. [?]
  • There may be an applicable infobox for this article. For example, see Template:Infobox Biography, Template:Infobox School, or Template:Infobox City. [?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
  • Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Wikipedia:Guide to layout. [?]
  • This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon. [?]
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
  • Avoid using contractions like (outside of quotations): isn't.
  • As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2] [?]
  • Please provide citations for all of the {{fact}}s. [?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]

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Monaco Grand Prix

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Denmark

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United States Navy enlisted rate insignia

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Reign in Blood

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  • The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article. [?]
  • See if possible if there is a free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article. [?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]

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Fairy

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  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. [?]
  • There may be an applicable infobox for this article. For example, see Template:Infobox Biography, Template:Infobox School, or Template:Infobox City. [?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
  • Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Wikipedia:Guide to layout. [?]
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
  • As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2] [?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]

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Tom Araya

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List of members in the 110th United States Congress

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  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. [?]
  • Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and WP:CONTEXT. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article. [?]
  • See if possible if there is a free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article. [?]
  • There may be an applicable infobox for this article. For example, see Template:Infobox Biography, Template:Infobox School, or Template:Infobox City. [?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
  • This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon. [?]
  • This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, than an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail. [?]
  • This article needs footnotes, preferably in the cite.php format recommended by WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with WP:CITE or WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <div class="references-small"><references/></div>. [?]
  • The article will need references. See WP:CITE and WP:V for more information. [?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]

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Roush Racing

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BBC News 24

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LSm

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  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. [?]
  • There may be an applicable infobox for this article. For example, see Template:Infobox Biography, Template:Infobox School, or Template:Infobox City. [?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space - &nbsp; between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 2nm, use 2 nm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 2&nbsp;nm. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth. [?] Specifically, an example is 7 nm.
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Pelé

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Simpson's paradox

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Kampfgruppe

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The Links, Incorporated

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Borobudur

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Wikipedia

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Brands Hatch

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Eicosanoid

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Carnivorous plant

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Harvest (band)

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Thanks for the suggestions. I will see what I can do to implement them.
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The Four Stages of Cruelty

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M.U.G.E.N

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Crusaders

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Claire Bennet

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Geography Cup

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Jurassic Park (film)

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Prostitution of children

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Isiah Leggett

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Vilnius Castle Complex

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Academy of Art University

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Cheyenne, Wyoming

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Universe

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Seventh-day Adventist Church

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    • allege
    • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment). [?]
  • Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: behaviour (B) (American: behavior), organize (A) (British: organise), organise (B) (American: organize), recognise (B) (American: recognize), criticise (B) (American: criticize), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), enrolment (B) (American: enrollment), fulfillment (A) (British: fulfilment), jewelry (A) (British: jewellery), jewellery (B) (American: jewelry), program (A) (British: programme), programme (B) (American: program ).
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Rowing (sport)

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  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth. [?] Specifically, an example is 185 km.
  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==. [?]
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  • Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Wikipedia:Summary style. [?]
  • Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honour (B) (American: honor), meter (A) (British: metre), metre (B) (American: meter), fiber (A) (British: fibre), organize (A) (British: organise), organise (B) (American: organize), pediatric (A) (British: paediatric).
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Komodo dragon

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  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth. [?] Specifically, an example is 166 kg.
  • When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006. [?]
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    • it has been
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  • Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: behavior (A) (British: behaviour), metre (B) (American: meter), defense (A) (British: defence), ization (A) (British: isation), cosy (B) (American: cozy), gray (A) (British: grey).
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Ralphie

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Bart King

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    • it has been
    • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment). [?]
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
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Riggs Stephenson

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Activism at Ohio Wesleyan University

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  • Avoid using contractions like (outside of quotations): didn't.
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The Pit and the Pendulum (1961 film)

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    • Not sure if I agree with this, as the current 2-paragraph lead seems to sufficiently and concisely summarize the article. However, I'll see if I can add another paragraph to satisfy this requirement, w/out having it simply "tacked on".- Hal Raglan 05:04, 24 January 2007 (UTC) reply
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    • Article seems to have sufficient links as is.- Hal Raglan 04:46, 24 January 2007 (UTC) reply
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    • While I understand the request, nearly all film-related articles on wikipedia feature posters or DVD covers in the infobox, and have similar fair use rationales as the ones I've provided.- Hal Raglan 04:58, 24 January 2007 (UTC) reply
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    • apparently
    • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment). [?]
    • Only one use of the noted word in the article, and as it describes a plot detail I don't agree that as utilized it could be considered a weasel word.
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    • All footnotes appear to conform to the referenced standard and are located after punctuation marks.- Hal Raglan 04:55, 24 January 2007 (UTC) reply
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    • It has been copyedited repeatedly by me but it is to be hoped that any lingering grammatical mistakes/typos will be caught by others during the manual peer review process.- Hal Raglan 05:01, 24 January 2007 (UTC) reply

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Operation Rolling Thunder

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Thomas Crisp

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  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==. [?]
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Eric Gascoigne Robinson

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John Donne

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  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006. [?]
  • As per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using January 30th was a great day, use January 30 was a great day. [?]
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    • is considered
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Myco-heterotrophy

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    • is considered
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  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
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  • As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2] [?]
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Raoul Wallenberg

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  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006. [?]
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
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Carl Tanzler

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Culture of California 1800s to mid 1900s

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  • When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==. [?]
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Henrietta Lacks

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Long Island Rail Road

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Olympic Committee of Portugal

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Neuro-linguistic programming

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Isiah Leggett

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Maxillary central incisor

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Sukhoi Su-30

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Ralph Bakshi

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Zelda II: The Adventure of Link

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Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute

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Same-sex marriage in Spain

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Freak Out!

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Crepitus (mythology)

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King George V School

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William C. Rogers III

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Armenian Revolutionary Federation

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Home run record in Home Run Derby

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Camp Gurs

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Montessori method

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Fairy tale

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Galaxy

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JFK (film)

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Jupiter

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Harry McNish

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Elimination of Fraternities at Williams College

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List of Olympic medalists in cross-country skiing

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Ted Kennedy

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Cool World

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The Notorious B.I.G.

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List of Queens and Empresses of France

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Triceratops

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Peter Jennings

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Aang

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Interstate 295 (Delaware-New Jersey)

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Set

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Rangers F.C.

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Colombo

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Hollywood North

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Hollaback Girl

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Dragons of Autumn Twilight

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Interstate 90

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Interstate 95

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Christ Illusion

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History of the battery

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School Rumble

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Albert Fish

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Chunchucmil

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Cricket World Cup

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Charter Oath

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HM-15

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Egyptian Invasion of Mani

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Siege of Eretria

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Munir Bashir

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Execution of Saddam Hussein

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Amenhotep I

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High School Musical

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F-Zero GX

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Miami International Airport

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Risk (game)

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Dominick Argento

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T-26

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Léonce Perret

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Pokémon Diamond and Pearl

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Maria Callas

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The Flood (Halo)

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Defense of the Ancients

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London Underground

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Maria Callas

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  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006. [?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), avoid capitalizing words unless they are proper nouns or the first word of the heading.
  • This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, than an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail. [?]
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Sunderland

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History of Pittsburgh

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Andrew Van De Kamp

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History of Milton Keynes

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Raven banner

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Jack Sheppard

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Eastern Suburbs & Illawarra railway line, Sydney

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Al-Kindi

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List of Stratocaster players

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Chrysiridia rhipheus

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Thomas Playford IV

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Social psychology (psychology)

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Maserati MC12

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OmenTFL

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Peter Canavan

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Apples and oranges

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Extreme ironing

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Tears of the Black Tiger

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Hasmonean

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Yabasic

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Léonce Perret

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Slayer

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Flag of Armenia

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Andrew Orlowski

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Jeff Hanneman

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Arbroath

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Wesley Clark

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Truthiness

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Chris Gardner

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Star Fox: Assault

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ANGI Homeservices

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    • I know this is an automated peer review by a bot; but one of the things I'm looking for is suggestions for what to add to the article to make it more comprehensive; what do readers want to know that isn't already specifically stated? ~ ONUnicorn( Talk| Contribs) problem solving
  • There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
    • it has been
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      • The specific "it has been" that you mentioned is atributed to the New York Times. There is another instance of weasle wording that the bot missed which has a {{fact}} tag appended to it. One of the problems is that the person who wants that nugget of information in the article can only attribute it to two on-line discussion forums, which in my understanding fail WP:RS. If anyone has suggestions for what to do about this, that's one of the specific things I'm looking for in this peer review. ~ ONUnicorn( Talk| Contribs) problem solving
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William Goebel

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Campaign history of the Roman military

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North Omaha, Nebraska

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Sandugo Festival

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Top Gear

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Imperial Trans-Antarctic Expedition

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Eskayan

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Characters of The Big O

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Truman Capote

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Double act

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Leonard Orban

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El Hatillo Municipality, Miranda

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Korona Kielce

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Multimeter

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Monaco Grand Prix

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Denmark

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United States Navy enlisted rate insignia

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Reign in Blood

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Fairy

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Tom Araya

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List of members in the 110th United States Congress

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Roush Racing

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BBC News 24

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LSm

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Pelé

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Simpson's paradox

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Kampfgruppe

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The Links, Incorporated

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Borobudur

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Wikipedia

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Brands Hatch

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Eicosanoid

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Carnivorous plant

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Harvest (band)

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Thanks for the suggestions. I will see what I can do to implement them.
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The Four Stages of Cruelty

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M.U.G.E.N

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Crusaders

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Claire Bennet

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Geography Cup

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Jurassic Park (film)

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Prostitution of children

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Isiah Leggett

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Vilnius Castle Complex

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Academy of Art University

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Cheyenne, Wyoming

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Universe

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Seventh-day Adventist Church

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Rowing (sport)

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Komodo dragon

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Ralphie

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Bart King

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  • There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
    • it has been
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Riggs Stephenson

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Activism at Ohio Wesleyan University

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  • This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon. [?]
  • Avoid using contractions like (outside of quotations): didn't.
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  • Please provide citations for all of the {{fact}}s. [?]
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The Pit and the Pendulum (1961 film)

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  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. [?]
    • Not sure if I agree with this, as the current 2-paragraph lead seems to sufficiently and concisely summarize the article. However, I'll see if I can add another paragraph to satisfy this requirement, w/out having it simply "tacked on".- Hal Raglan 05:04, 24 January 2007 (UTC) reply
  • Consider adding more links to the article; per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles. [?]
    • Article seems to have sufficient links as is.- Hal Raglan 04:46, 24 January 2007 (UTC) reply
  • See if possible if there is a free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article. [?]
    • While I understand the request, nearly all film-related articles on wikipedia feature posters or DVD covers in the infobox, and have similar fair use rationales as the ones I've provided.- Hal Raglan 04:58, 24 January 2007 (UTC) reply
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    • apparently
    • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment). [?]
    • Only one use of the noted word in the article, and as it describes a plot detail I don't agree that as utilized it could be considered a weasel word.
  • As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2] [?]
    • All footnotes appear to conform to the referenced standard and are located after punctuation marks.- Hal Raglan 04:55, 24 January 2007 (UTC) reply
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    • It has been copyedited repeatedly by me but it is to be hoped that any lingering grammatical mistakes/typos will be caught by others during the manual peer review process.- Hal Raglan 05:01, 24 January 2007 (UTC) reply

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Operation Rolling Thunder

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Thomas Crisp

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Eric Gascoigne Robinson

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John Donne

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  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006. [?]
  • As per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using January 30th was a great day, use January 30 was a great day. [?]
  • Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article. [?]
  • There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
    • is considered
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  • Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: harbor (A) (British: harbour), meter (A) (British: metre), defense (A) (British: defence), defence (B) (American: defense), ization (A) (British: isation), travelled (B) (American: traveled).
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Myco-heterotrophy

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    • is considered
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  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
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Raoul Wallenberg

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  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006. [?]
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Carl Tanzler

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Culture of California 1800s to mid 1900s

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  • When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006. [?]
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Henrietta Lacks

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Long Island Rail Road

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    • is considered
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  • Avoid using contractions like (outside of quotations): isn't, isn't.
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Olympic Committee of Portugal

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Neuro-linguistic programming

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Isiah Leggett

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Maxillary central incisor

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Sukhoi Su-30

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Ralph Bakshi

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Zelda II: The Adventure of Link

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Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute

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Same-sex marriage in Spain

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Freak Out!

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Crepitus (mythology)

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King George V School

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William C. Rogers III

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Armenian Revolutionary Federation

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Home run record in Home Run Derby

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Camp Gurs

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Montessori method

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Fairy tale

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Galaxy

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JFK (film)

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Jupiter

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Harry McNish

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Elimination of Fraternities at Williams College

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List of Olympic medalists in cross-country skiing

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Ted Kennedy

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Cool World

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The Notorious B.I.G.

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List of Queens and Empresses of France

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Triceratops

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Peter Jennings

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Aang

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Interstate 295 (Delaware-New Jersey)

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Set

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Rangers F.C.

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Colombo

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Hollywood North

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Hollaback Girl

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Dragons of Autumn Twilight

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Interstate 90

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Interstate 95

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Christ Illusion

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History of the battery

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School Rumble

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Albert Fish

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Chunchucmil

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Cricket World Cup

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Charter Oath

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HM-15

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Egyptian Invasion of Mani

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Siege of Eretria

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Munir Bashir

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Execution of Saddam Hussein

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High School Musical

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F-Zero GX

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Miami International Airport

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Risk (game)

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Dominick Argento

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T-26

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Léonce Perret

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Pokémon Diamond and Pearl

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Maria Callas

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The Flood (Halo)

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Defense of the Ancients

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London Underground

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Maria Callas

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Sunderland

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History of Pittsburgh

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Andrew Van De Kamp

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History of Milton Keynes

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Raven banner

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Jack Sheppard

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Eastern Suburbs & Illawarra railway line, Sydney

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Al-Kindi

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List of Stratocaster players

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Chrysiridia rhipheus

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Thomas Playford IV

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Social psychology (psychology)

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Maserati MC12

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OmenTFL

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Peter Canavan

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Apples and oranges

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Extreme ironing

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Tears of the Black Tiger

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Hasmonean

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Yabasic

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Léonce Perret

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Slayer

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Flag of Armenia

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Andrew Orlowski

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Jeff Hanneman

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Arbroath

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  • When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==. [?]
  • Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Wikipedia:Summary style. [?]
  • Avoid using contractions like: isn't.
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Wesley Clark

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  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006. [?]
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Truthiness

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Chris Gardner

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