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I've listed this article for peer review because…
Thanks,
Basketball
110
Go Longhorns!
20:34, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
SGGH
I suggest:
All in all, its a good start, obviously it needs more information to develop, and being that it is in its infancy at the moment, I don't know if my peer reviewing can tell you more than you clearly already know. SGGH speak! 16:34, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
I suggest much the same as SGGH. I have given it an edit by adding in some sections that you can use for expansion. I also added in a WP:LEAD. I would concentrate on finding out more about his early life and his family life including who he married and when he died etc. All this information needs to be sourced using inline citations as noted above. If I can help with this, then just ask. Hope this helps and regards. Woody ( talk) 17:28, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because…
Thanks,
Basketball
110
Go Longhorns!
20:34, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
SGGH
I suggest:
All in all, its a good start, obviously it needs more information to develop, and being that it is in its infancy at the moment, I don't know if my peer reviewing can tell you more than you clearly already know. SGGH speak! 16:34, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
I suggest much the same as SGGH. I have given it an edit by adding in some sections that you can use for expansion. I also added in a WP:LEAD. I would concentrate on finding out more about his early life and his family life including who he married and when he died etc. All this information needs to be sourced using inline citations as noted above. If I can help with this, then just ask. Hope this helps and regards. Woody ( talk) 17:28, 30 March 2008 (UTC)