A general review for clarity and good english language stuff would be a good idea, I think. Ultimatly, I and another editor want to see this be a good article and potentially a featured article, and we have both exhausted our own resources and would prefer to have solid books by doctorate posessing Egyptologists, so if there are any obvious holes that need to be filled in, it would be good to neatly and clearly identify them, because filling them will require some pretty deep reasearch. Thanks Thanatosimii 01:41, 24 July 2006 (UTC)
A general review for clarity and good english language stuff would be a good idea, I think. Ultimatly, I and another editor want to see this be a good article and potentially a featured article, and we have both exhausted our own resources and would prefer to have solid books by doctorate posessing Egyptologists, so if there are any obvious holes that need to be filled in, it would be good to neatly and clearly identify them, because filling them will require some pretty deep reasearch. Thanks Thanatosimii 01:41, 24 July 2006 (UTC)