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This article has gone through four GA nominations (succeeding in the last) and one FAC (failed). I really need extremely close-up feedback on the prose. I have tried copyediting it myself, but I am not sure. I really need as much advice as possible. If you see any other problems with the article, mention it here to. Thanks, —
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21:16, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
No expert by any means but please accept comments of a layman...
Sorry I can't help more, but hopefully some of these comments are of use. The Rambling Man ( talk) 17:46, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
Although it may take a while, the League of Copyeditors may be more what you want (line by line) - see WP:LOCE. Ruhrfisch ><>°° 23:44, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
This article has gone through four GA nominations (succeeding in the last) and one FAC (failed). I really need extremely close-up feedback on the prose. I have tried copyediting it myself, but I am not sure. I really need as much advice as possible. If you see any other problems with the article, mention it here to. Thanks, —
Parent5446 (
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l)
21:16, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
No expert by any means but please accept comments of a layman...
Sorry I can't help more, but hopefully some of these comments are of use. The Rambling Man ( talk) 17:46, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
Although it may take a while, the League of Copyeditors may be more what you want (line by line) - see WP:LOCE. Ruhrfisch ><>°° 23:44, 3 April 2008 (UTC)