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- A script has been used to generate a semi- automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for September 2008.
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because
Torsodog (
talk ·
contribs) and I want to nominate
Millennium Park for
WP:GTC and this article needs to be audited as too short for
WP:GA.--
TonyTheTiger (
t/
c/
bio/
WP:CHICAGO/
WP:LOTM) 00:46, 13 September 2008 (UTC)
- Comments
- Please see comments at the review
here, particularly with regard to images and en-dashes.
- Did I miss an ndash location?-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 06:02, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- I am going to try to keep the images and hope the article grows into them. They explain the brief history of the space.-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 06:02, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- The infobox looks a little strange - is that a thumb embedded in an infobox? Is that necessary? It makes the image have three frames...
- One thing I could use for this infobox is the dimension either length and width or square feet of the plaza. Any help would be appreciated. It is the only significant thing I can think to add to the article that I think should be available.-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 06:17, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- Otherwise thanks for the infobox suggestion.-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 06:17, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- Image captions are sentence fragments so they don't need
full stops.
- O.K.-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 06:03, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- "coral groups " choral?
- O.K.-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 06:22, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- " [2006]." why not "(2006)."?
- It is a citation template. Is it incorrect?-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 06:23, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
The Rambling Man ( talk) 13:46, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
AT&T Plaza
- A script has been used to generate a semi- automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for September 2008.
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because
Torsodog (
talk ·
contribs) and I want to nominate
Millennium Park for
WP:GTC and this article needs to be audited as too short for
WP:GA.--
TonyTheTiger (
t/
c/
bio/
WP:CHICAGO/
WP:LOTM) 00:46, 13 September 2008 (UTC)
- Comments
- Please see comments at the review
here, particularly with regard to images and en-dashes.
- Did I miss an ndash location?-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 06:02, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- I am going to try to keep the images and hope the article grows into them. They explain the brief history of the space.-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 06:02, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- The infobox looks a little strange - is that a thumb embedded in an infobox? Is that necessary? It makes the image have three frames...
- One thing I could use for this infobox is the dimension either length and width or square feet of the plaza. Any help would be appreciated. It is the only significant thing I can think to add to the article that I think should be available.-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 06:17, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- Otherwise thanks for the infobox suggestion.-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 06:17, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- Image captions are sentence fragments so they don't need
full stops.
- O.K.-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 06:03, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- "coral groups " choral?
- O.K.-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 06:22, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- " [2006]." why not "(2006)."?
- It is a citation template. Is it incorrect?-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 06:23, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
The Rambling Man ( talk) 13:46, 17 September 2008 (UTC)