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I've listed this article for peer review because I am planning to nominate it for GA, and I'm unsure if the article itself is 100% completed.
Thanks, Vacant0 ( talk) 14:02, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
I've made some initial copy-edits and prose work ( Special:Diff/1047110912), feel free to revert some or all of them if you disagree. I'll post some more feedback in a bit; I'll go section by section. Zetana ( talk) 02:04, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
Overall, I think the article has most information that a reader would be looking for. Personally, I'd switch the Electoral system and Background sections so Electoral system is first, followed by Background. I don't know anything about Serbian politics, so I'd be interested in having some summaries of the parties in the running (did they campaign on any specific issues?). I also think the Background and Results sections could use more information (why'd Preševo's city council get dissolved in 2017? what did Movement for Krajina campaign on? what were the results of the "multiple elections"? etc. / was there any polling information predicting election results? what did political parties say about the results? etc.) as well.
In case you haven't seen it already, there's a number of elections-related FAs at Wikipedia:WikiProject Elections and Referendums § Featured articles that might be a good reference. I can post section-specific comments on prose tomorrow. Zetana ( talk) 06:15, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
Hi @ Vacant0:, are you still looking for comments for this PR? If so, I suggest posting a request for review on the Wikiprojects that this article is attached to. If you think this article is ready for GAN, please close this PR and nominate the article for WP:GAN. Thanks. Z1720 ( talk) 16:29, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
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I've listed this article for peer review because I am planning to nominate it for GA, and I'm unsure if the article itself is 100% completed.
Thanks, Vacant0 ( talk) 14:02, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
I've made some initial copy-edits and prose work ( Special:Diff/1047110912), feel free to revert some or all of them if you disagree. I'll post some more feedback in a bit; I'll go section by section. Zetana ( talk) 02:04, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
Overall, I think the article has most information that a reader would be looking for. Personally, I'd switch the Electoral system and Background sections so Electoral system is first, followed by Background. I don't know anything about Serbian politics, so I'd be interested in having some summaries of the parties in the running (did they campaign on any specific issues?). I also think the Background and Results sections could use more information (why'd Preševo's city council get dissolved in 2017? what did Movement for Krajina campaign on? what were the results of the "multiple elections"? etc. / was there any polling information predicting election results? what did political parties say about the results? etc.) as well.
In case you haven't seen it already, there's a number of elections-related FAs at Wikipedia:WikiProject Elections and Referendums § Featured articles that might be a good reference. I can post section-specific comments on prose tomorrow. Zetana ( talk) 06:15, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
Hi @ Vacant0:, are you still looking for comments for this PR? If so, I suggest posting a request for review on the Wikiprojects that this article is attached to. If you think this article is ready for GAN, please close this PR and nominate the article for WP:GAN. Thanks. Z1720 ( talk) 16:29, 14 December 2021 (UTC)