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I've listed this article for peer review because I am trying to get this to FAC although it needs to become a GA first (It is waiting at the moment) and I want some feedback. particually I want to know whether the day by day summeries fit in here although there is a deletion arguement going on which has been closed as merge, it seems to not fit in here plus this article is already very long. I've removed it for now.
Thanks, KnowIG ( talk) 13:12, 1 February 2011 (UTC)
Comment: Shouldn't the title indicate that this refers to a tennis tournament? After all, we have Australian Open (golf). Brianboulton ( talk) 00:57, 6 February 2011 (UTC)
The prose overall is very weak and needs a good deal of attention to bring it to FAC level. The following list relates only to the lead and first short section. A full and careful copyedit is essential before this article proceeds.
I've done all of the prose points apart from NEC tour as I assume you want me to explain/link to it. The page doesn't exist right now, but I am working on it. KnowIG ( talk) 23:31, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
A couple of points:-
I hope you find these points useful. As I am not able to watch all my peer reviews, please use my talkpage if you want to raise ant issues with me, or if you would like me to look again. Brianboulton ( talk) 14:47, 13 February 2011 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I am trying to get this to FAC although it needs to become a GA first (It is waiting at the moment) and I want some feedback. particually I want to know whether the day by day summeries fit in here although there is a deletion arguement going on which has been closed as merge, it seems to not fit in here plus this article is already very long. I've removed it for now.
Thanks, KnowIG ( talk) 13:12, 1 February 2011 (UTC)
Comment: Shouldn't the title indicate that this refers to a tennis tournament? After all, we have Australian Open (golf). Brianboulton ( talk) 00:57, 6 February 2011 (UTC)
The prose overall is very weak and needs a good deal of attention to bring it to FAC level. The following list relates only to the lead and first short section. A full and careful copyedit is essential before this article proceeds.
I've done all of the prose points apart from NEC tour as I assume you want me to explain/link to it. The page doesn't exist right now, but I am working on it. KnowIG ( talk) 23:31, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
A couple of points:-
I hope you find these points useful. As I am not able to watch all my peer reviews, please use my talkpage if you want to raise ant issues with me, or if you would like me to look again. Brianboulton ( talk) 14:47, 13 February 2011 (UTC)