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I've listed this article for peer review because the article has been a good article since a long time and I believe that almost everything has been list with a neutral point of view.Additional details have been split into relevant articles.This quite might be a FAC
Thanks, Princeaditya ( talk) 09:52, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
Just a general comment on the content. You may wish to include a mention of the criticisms levelled that there was no unified press briefing, that repeated claims of the operations being over, and the criticisms of the Naval commando chief giving a press briefing. You might also wish to include the role of the media, the live coverage, and the fact that some criticisms were made that some news channels' coverage was deemed more editorial rather than objective. In the aftermath section, you would wish to include the impact it had on the Indo-Pak relationship, and the public response in Pakistan. Hope these are helpful. rueben_lys ( talk · contribs) 09:47, 23 May 2009 (UTC)
TIPS
And yes, how all this shook cricket is also needed. Hometech ( talk) 19:26, 24 May 2009 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because the article has been a good article since a long time and I believe that almost everything has been list with a neutral point of view.Additional details have been split into relevant articles.This quite might be a FAC
Thanks, Princeaditya ( talk) 09:52, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
Just a general comment on the content. You may wish to include a mention of the criticisms levelled that there was no unified press briefing, that repeated claims of the operations being over, and the criticisms of the Naval commando chief giving a press briefing. You might also wish to include the role of the media, the live coverage, and the fact that some criticisms were made that some news channels' coverage was deemed more editorial rather than objective. In the aftermath section, you would wish to include the impact it had on the Indo-Pak relationship, and the public response in Pakistan. Hope these are helpful. rueben_lys ( talk · contribs) 09:47, 23 May 2009 (UTC)
TIPS
And yes, how all this shook cricket is also needed. Hometech ( talk) 19:26, 24 May 2009 (UTC)