Wikipedia Mediation Cabal | |
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Article | Electroconvulsive therapy |
Status | closed |
Request date | Unknown |
Requesting party | Unknown |
Mediator(s) | Jacroe |
[[Category:Wikipedia Medcab closed cases| Electroconvulsive therapy]][[Category:Wikipedia medcab maintenance| Electroconvulsive therapy]]
Staug73 v Loodog and Scuro
I (Staug73) think Loodog and Scuro are trying to sabotage this article, I think that the NPOV tag is unwarranted (they won't say which statements they think are not neutral) and their demands for more footnotes a bit unreasonable (I don't mind putting in a few more, but I think the article is already well-referenced). Also they are not being polite.
I would like them to remain civil and reasonable and not keep putting on a NPOV tag. If they have any suggestions about improving the article then I would be happy to hear them, but they don't seem to know much about the subject or be interested in writing something.
Hi, could I first of all remind Scuro that Wiki is an encyclopedia, it is not intended to be a resource for people "at the point of crisis". Wiki is definitely not about giving people medical advice. That said, of course, people in crisis may be reading Wiki and yes, that is something I bear in mind. But an encyclopedia article about a medical treatment may contain information about the history of a treatment that you wouldn't expect to find in a patient information leaflet. I am however, quite amenable to moving some things around. Re the POV accusations - I have put in a RfC but have only had one response - from Scuro! I did have one response (from someone not involved with the article) on my talk page. It was wholly positive. I will have another go at a RfC request - but could we please leave the response for comment section on the discussion page blank for responses from people who respond to the request? I have tried to stick to facts and, where opinions differ, to say who says what. Obviously this is difficult when you are dealing with a very controversial topic. In the meantime, could I ask Scuro to read the wiki guidelines on POV? Staug73 15:34, 7 May 2007 (UTC)
Hey, I'm Jacroe. I'll be the mediator for this case. Have both parties agreed to the terms on the WP:MEDCAB site? Jac roe 22:24, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
Hi Jacroe. Yes, I have read the medcab page and agree to terms. Am I meant to reply here or on your talk page? Staug73 15:38, 5 May 2007 (UTC)
From my vantage point the article is clearly biased and was blatantly so before requests for citations and edits were made. I have informally stated several times in the discussion area why I believe this article to be biased. Recently I have also posted clear examples of very flawed sections and further reasons why I find the article biased. At this point I have committed myself to editing the whole article because of the bias of the information presented. Why? because unsuspecting readers who may be, or have loved ones at a point of crisis, may be looking at Wikipedia for answers. They won't find a balanced article here. One solution is to allow me to continue. Granted this will be a long process, especially if this is mainly done in discussion. I am willing but while this process goes on a NPOV tag should stay on the article as this is being done. If someone wants to make a formal process out of this, so be it.
At first glance, my knowledge of this subject doesn't seem to be inferior to Staug73 and that's not really the issue here. It is an issue of an article that is clearly biased. I'm also quite willing to discuss this matter as my multiple posts in discussion clearly illustrates. As for the issue of the NPOV tag, I've given up there after several attempts to repost the tag. It was simply taken down every time I posted it. I still find the article biased and presently it should have an NPOV tag on it to alert readers. -- scuro 21:23, 6 May 2007 (UTC)
I am trying to create an article based on contempory usage with sources for strong claims about ECT. The article blatantly skews modern views on ECT by overemphasizing historical perspective. My edits have primarily consisted of adding pov, fact, and or tags, in addition to things like removing John Breeding's viewpoints, which were given an entire section and called "Psychological Effects", as if it were some common concensus. I would request of Staug73 to 1) assume good faith and 2) refrain from personal attacks. As for the NPOV tag, it stays so long as there is disagreement. To do otherwise would be a misrepresentation of collective editors' opinions of the article, providing false assurance to readers. I agree with Scuro that the article should be appropriately balanced for whatever use the article receives and it it isn't, should definitely have a disclaimer.-- Loodog 01:24, 7 May 2007 (UTC)
Regardless of the outcome of this process, we need to live in the same "space". I find it highly challenging to work on the article with editors who remove IPOV tags and delete major subsections all without a peep in discussion. The discussion page is not being used the way it is meant to be used. We use discussion pages to communicate and reach collaborative decisions, especially when there is widespread disagreement...hence the word, "consensus". I respectfully ask Staug73, to undo his recent major edits and follow this process as laid out in Wiki guidelines. Talk and reach consensus before you do. That is a process I am willing to follow to the letter if I know that other editors will also respect this process.-- scuro 20:47, 7 May 2007 (UTC)
My edits are deleted my ipov tags are deleted and no recent communication in discussion. I can not function as an editor. HELP!! I am asking for intervention now. Please respond mediator.-- scuro 16:41, 8 May 2007 (UTC)
"Electroconvulsive therapy; 17:29(+14)Staug73 (Talk | contribs) (→The History of ECT - Hands off - this is MY section (for the history taken out of rest of article))" Each day gets worse with further sections removed. I don't know how to say this nicely....Jacroe, you have my blessings to attempt anything as long as in the end we don't make exceptions to placate other members.-- scuro 02:24, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
Thank you. That gives everyone a breather. Staug73 14:31, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
I still see this conflict as a problem of not following Wikipedia procedure, lack of communication, and high levels of frustration ...rather then of sabotage. Granted our views on this page are polar as they most likely are on even methods of procedure but that doesn't mean we can't coexist on the same page. These difficulties can be overcome with good faith and some work. If others agree then I suggest we move forward towards an informal process.
If on the other hand this dispute is still seen as a case of willful sabotage then this impression should be reconfirmed and this process should move towards a formal hearing. I am ready when others are ready.-- scuro 16:40, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
Staug73 14:06, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
Forgive me if my last post wasn't polished but that lack of refinement has been caused by recent conditioning on the ECT article. You see several of my most recent edits have been deleted. Therefore, I wasn't going to invest a lot of time into this procedure. I first wanted to see if ANY of my contribution would "stick" to the page. When your work isn't respected you tend not to invest a lot of yourself into something.
Criticisms #1-#6 should be posted on the discussion page as should all criticisms. In fact I have continually invited editors to post in discussion instead of on the edit message itself or not at all...so that real communication can begin. Could Staug73 be totally correct in his 6 point critique? I don't know because I'll respond to these points when I see them posted in discussion. Are there errors in my post that may need to be fixed? Sure...if this is pointed out to me with the opportunity of rebuttal, I would personally amend posts or give any corrections my blessings.
My "strong POV" generally is nothing more then quotes and connecting information in a coherent way. There is very little or no opinion in any of my edits. All of this information can be referenced, and all of it is from acceptable sources of information. Contrast that to editors who posted and reposted clearly POV material that shouldn't be on the article such as the musings of John Breeding.
But all of this is not the point, is it? We all have bias and others who have polar points of view on other articles can live together on the same page. Wikipedia has a standard which when it is followed eliminates a great deal of bias. Some also think I may not be knowledgeable about this topic but again, Wikipedia has a process and clear standards about what should go on a page and how to eliminate factual errors.
So in my mind, the real question still is do some editors see other editors as working in bad faith to willfully sabotage the article? Does the complainant still believe this?-- scuro 17:15, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
To date we have had no movement on Staug73's part and we have only seen further complaints. He hasn't even commented on whether he still believes his original complaint of "sabotage" still holds and if we are to resolve these issues there is work to do. All parties have something to gain by working together.-- scuro 00:19, 14 May 2007 (UTC)
I don't want to know word for word, just the basics. We need to compromise on this quickly as scuro has stated. We don't have much time. Jac roe 20:48, 14 May 2007 (UTC)
Re historical bias - if you glance down the list of footnotes to number 51 (where the history section begins) you will see that they are almost all from recent sources. Staug73 14:32, 15 May 2007 (UTC)
My hope is that as soon as the lock comes off, Staug73 will post his criticisms of the Devanand edits in the discussion area where I will finally respond to them. Just because I haven't responded to them here doesn't mean that I fully or even partially agree with Staug73's contentions. That needs to be sorted out in discussion per WP:CON. I will not be unreasonable if something can be shown and cited. I have no problems with removal or change but all of that should be agreed to including the final implementation of change,..in discussion. This is especially true since ECT has become such a contentious article.
Historical bias- WP:CON There are other sections of the article that begin with historical perspectives at or near the beginning and then end with recent consensus in the field. There were more sections like this before we came to the article. Such an approach does not follow WP:NPOV, specifically undo-weight for information of less relevance. Specifically placing less important information first.-- scuro 16:44, 15 May 2007 (UTC)
( WP:EP) It is wonderful when someone adds a complete, well-written, final draft to Wikipedia. This should always be encouraged.
However, one of the great advantages of the Wiki system is that incomplete or poorly written first drafts of articles can evolve into polished, presentable masterpieces through the process of collaborative editing. This gives our approach an advantage over other ways of producing similar end-products. Hence, the submission of rough drafts should also be encouraged as much as possible.
Clearly no editor is free of bias, makes no writing errors, or never posts false information. It is pointless to note these shortcomings in one editor especially if it is used as a "bone of contention", because we all have these weaknesses and examples of each can be found in all of our postings. What matters is good faith and a willingness to work together.-- scuro 12:51, 19 May 2007 (UTC)
-- scuro 12:51, 19 May 2007 (UTC)
Well, the general policy for wikipedia articles is just to make the changes without asking unless disagreement arises, in which case all changes should be discussed first.-- Loodog 16:01, 22 May 2007 (UTC)
If staug73 will agree to the terms, I would say that this case is closed. -- Jac roe 05:07, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
Jacroe, what terms are we talking about? Staug73 16:53, 30 May 2007 (UTC)
Sorry, I didn't see your reply. Could we just clear up one thing, please. No-one is suggesting that I have made personal comments about anyone, are they? Staug73 15:03, 25 June 2007 (UTC)
Yeah Staug73 remarks directed my way were personal in nature. What remarks, please? Could you say exactly what remarks you are referring to, with date and time? Staug73 16:49, 25 June 2007 (UTC)
Scuro, you made an accusation. Could you please substantiate it.09:57, 27 June 2007 (UTC)09:58, 27 June 2007 (UTC) Staug73 09:59, 27 June 2007 (UTC)
Wikipedia Mediation Cabal | |
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Article | Electroconvulsive therapy |
Status | closed |
Request date | Unknown |
Requesting party | Unknown |
Mediator(s) | Jacroe |
[[Category:Wikipedia Medcab closed cases| Electroconvulsive therapy]][[Category:Wikipedia medcab maintenance| Electroconvulsive therapy]]
Staug73 v Loodog and Scuro
I (Staug73) think Loodog and Scuro are trying to sabotage this article, I think that the NPOV tag is unwarranted (they won't say which statements they think are not neutral) and their demands for more footnotes a bit unreasonable (I don't mind putting in a few more, but I think the article is already well-referenced). Also they are not being polite.
I would like them to remain civil and reasonable and not keep putting on a NPOV tag. If they have any suggestions about improving the article then I would be happy to hear them, but they don't seem to know much about the subject or be interested in writing something.
Hi, could I first of all remind Scuro that Wiki is an encyclopedia, it is not intended to be a resource for people "at the point of crisis". Wiki is definitely not about giving people medical advice. That said, of course, people in crisis may be reading Wiki and yes, that is something I bear in mind. But an encyclopedia article about a medical treatment may contain information about the history of a treatment that you wouldn't expect to find in a patient information leaflet. I am however, quite amenable to moving some things around. Re the POV accusations - I have put in a RfC but have only had one response - from Scuro! I did have one response (from someone not involved with the article) on my talk page. It was wholly positive. I will have another go at a RfC request - but could we please leave the response for comment section on the discussion page blank for responses from people who respond to the request? I have tried to stick to facts and, where opinions differ, to say who says what. Obviously this is difficult when you are dealing with a very controversial topic. In the meantime, could I ask Scuro to read the wiki guidelines on POV? Staug73 15:34, 7 May 2007 (UTC)
Hey, I'm Jacroe. I'll be the mediator for this case. Have both parties agreed to the terms on the WP:MEDCAB site? Jac roe 22:24, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
Hi Jacroe. Yes, I have read the medcab page and agree to terms. Am I meant to reply here or on your talk page? Staug73 15:38, 5 May 2007 (UTC)
From my vantage point the article is clearly biased and was blatantly so before requests for citations and edits were made. I have informally stated several times in the discussion area why I believe this article to be biased. Recently I have also posted clear examples of very flawed sections and further reasons why I find the article biased. At this point I have committed myself to editing the whole article because of the bias of the information presented. Why? because unsuspecting readers who may be, or have loved ones at a point of crisis, may be looking at Wikipedia for answers. They won't find a balanced article here. One solution is to allow me to continue. Granted this will be a long process, especially if this is mainly done in discussion. I am willing but while this process goes on a NPOV tag should stay on the article as this is being done. If someone wants to make a formal process out of this, so be it.
At first glance, my knowledge of this subject doesn't seem to be inferior to Staug73 and that's not really the issue here. It is an issue of an article that is clearly biased. I'm also quite willing to discuss this matter as my multiple posts in discussion clearly illustrates. As for the issue of the NPOV tag, I've given up there after several attempts to repost the tag. It was simply taken down every time I posted it. I still find the article biased and presently it should have an NPOV tag on it to alert readers. -- scuro 21:23, 6 May 2007 (UTC)
I am trying to create an article based on contempory usage with sources for strong claims about ECT. The article blatantly skews modern views on ECT by overemphasizing historical perspective. My edits have primarily consisted of adding pov, fact, and or tags, in addition to things like removing John Breeding's viewpoints, which were given an entire section and called "Psychological Effects", as if it were some common concensus. I would request of Staug73 to 1) assume good faith and 2) refrain from personal attacks. As for the NPOV tag, it stays so long as there is disagreement. To do otherwise would be a misrepresentation of collective editors' opinions of the article, providing false assurance to readers. I agree with Scuro that the article should be appropriately balanced for whatever use the article receives and it it isn't, should definitely have a disclaimer.-- Loodog 01:24, 7 May 2007 (UTC)
Regardless of the outcome of this process, we need to live in the same "space". I find it highly challenging to work on the article with editors who remove IPOV tags and delete major subsections all without a peep in discussion. The discussion page is not being used the way it is meant to be used. We use discussion pages to communicate and reach collaborative decisions, especially when there is widespread disagreement...hence the word, "consensus". I respectfully ask Staug73, to undo his recent major edits and follow this process as laid out in Wiki guidelines. Talk and reach consensus before you do. That is a process I am willing to follow to the letter if I know that other editors will also respect this process.-- scuro 20:47, 7 May 2007 (UTC)
My edits are deleted my ipov tags are deleted and no recent communication in discussion. I can not function as an editor. HELP!! I am asking for intervention now. Please respond mediator.-- scuro 16:41, 8 May 2007 (UTC)
"Electroconvulsive therapy; 17:29(+14)Staug73 (Talk | contribs) (→The History of ECT - Hands off - this is MY section (for the history taken out of rest of article))" Each day gets worse with further sections removed. I don't know how to say this nicely....Jacroe, you have my blessings to attempt anything as long as in the end we don't make exceptions to placate other members.-- scuro 02:24, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
Thank you. That gives everyone a breather. Staug73 14:31, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
I still see this conflict as a problem of not following Wikipedia procedure, lack of communication, and high levels of frustration ...rather then of sabotage. Granted our views on this page are polar as they most likely are on even methods of procedure but that doesn't mean we can't coexist on the same page. These difficulties can be overcome with good faith and some work. If others agree then I suggest we move forward towards an informal process.
If on the other hand this dispute is still seen as a case of willful sabotage then this impression should be reconfirmed and this process should move towards a formal hearing. I am ready when others are ready.-- scuro 16:40, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
Staug73 14:06, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
Forgive me if my last post wasn't polished but that lack of refinement has been caused by recent conditioning on the ECT article. You see several of my most recent edits have been deleted. Therefore, I wasn't going to invest a lot of time into this procedure. I first wanted to see if ANY of my contribution would "stick" to the page. When your work isn't respected you tend not to invest a lot of yourself into something.
Criticisms #1-#6 should be posted on the discussion page as should all criticisms. In fact I have continually invited editors to post in discussion instead of on the edit message itself or not at all...so that real communication can begin. Could Staug73 be totally correct in his 6 point critique? I don't know because I'll respond to these points when I see them posted in discussion. Are there errors in my post that may need to be fixed? Sure...if this is pointed out to me with the opportunity of rebuttal, I would personally amend posts or give any corrections my blessings.
My "strong POV" generally is nothing more then quotes and connecting information in a coherent way. There is very little or no opinion in any of my edits. All of this information can be referenced, and all of it is from acceptable sources of information. Contrast that to editors who posted and reposted clearly POV material that shouldn't be on the article such as the musings of John Breeding.
But all of this is not the point, is it? We all have bias and others who have polar points of view on other articles can live together on the same page. Wikipedia has a standard which when it is followed eliminates a great deal of bias. Some also think I may not be knowledgeable about this topic but again, Wikipedia has a process and clear standards about what should go on a page and how to eliminate factual errors.
So in my mind, the real question still is do some editors see other editors as working in bad faith to willfully sabotage the article? Does the complainant still believe this?-- scuro 17:15, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
To date we have had no movement on Staug73's part and we have only seen further complaints. He hasn't even commented on whether he still believes his original complaint of "sabotage" still holds and if we are to resolve these issues there is work to do. All parties have something to gain by working together.-- scuro 00:19, 14 May 2007 (UTC)
I don't want to know word for word, just the basics. We need to compromise on this quickly as scuro has stated. We don't have much time. Jac roe 20:48, 14 May 2007 (UTC)
Re historical bias - if you glance down the list of footnotes to number 51 (where the history section begins) you will see that they are almost all from recent sources. Staug73 14:32, 15 May 2007 (UTC)
My hope is that as soon as the lock comes off, Staug73 will post his criticisms of the Devanand edits in the discussion area where I will finally respond to them. Just because I haven't responded to them here doesn't mean that I fully or even partially agree with Staug73's contentions. That needs to be sorted out in discussion per WP:CON. I will not be unreasonable if something can be shown and cited. I have no problems with removal or change but all of that should be agreed to including the final implementation of change,..in discussion. This is especially true since ECT has become such a contentious article.
Historical bias- WP:CON There are other sections of the article that begin with historical perspectives at or near the beginning and then end with recent consensus in the field. There were more sections like this before we came to the article. Such an approach does not follow WP:NPOV, specifically undo-weight for information of less relevance. Specifically placing less important information first.-- scuro 16:44, 15 May 2007 (UTC)
( WP:EP) It is wonderful when someone adds a complete, well-written, final draft to Wikipedia. This should always be encouraged.
However, one of the great advantages of the Wiki system is that incomplete or poorly written first drafts of articles can evolve into polished, presentable masterpieces through the process of collaborative editing. This gives our approach an advantage over other ways of producing similar end-products. Hence, the submission of rough drafts should also be encouraged as much as possible.
Clearly no editor is free of bias, makes no writing errors, or never posts false information. It is pointless to note these shortcomings in one editor especially if it is used as a "bone of contention", because we all have these weaknesses and examples of each can be found in all of our postings. What matters is good faith and a willingness to work together.-- scuro 12:51, 19 May 2007 (UTC)
-- scuro 12:51, 19 May 2007 (UTC)
Well, the general policy for wikipedia articles is just to make the changes without asking unless disagreement arises, in which case all changes should be discussed first.-- Loodog 16:01, 22 May 2007 (UTC)
If staug73 will agree to the terms, I would say that this case is closed. -- Jac roe 05:07, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
Jacroe, what terms are we talking about? Staug73 16:53, 30 May 2007 (UTC)
Sorry, I didn't see your reply. Could we just clear up one thing, please. No-one is suggesting that I have made personal comments about anyone, are they? Staug73 15:03, 25 June 2007 (UTC)
Yeah Staug73 remarks directed my way were personal in nature. What remarks, please? Could you say exactly what remarks you are referring to, with date and time? Staug73 16:49, 25 June 2007 (UTC)
Scuro, you made an accusation. Could you please substantiate it.09:57, 27 June 2007 (UTC)09:58, 27 June 2007 (UTC) Staug73 09:59, 27 June 2007 (UTC)