Alienus 13:09, 6 December 2005 (UTC)
It appears that Loxley strongly supports one warring camp of philosophers who disagree with Dennett, so his changes are largely focused on defining Dennett as negatively as possible. Besides the excess POV, he does not possess a clear understanding of Dennett's work, so he's also making numerous factual errors. I've done my best to merge in whatever good parts he's added, clarify things that could be misunderstood and generally put together better pages. His counter-changes started off as reasonable if flawed, but have progressed to simple vandalism.
I've tried to discuss this with him, but it has not been productive. From my point of view, he's been argumentative, unresponsive and very deeply biased. I've lost respect for him, and now just consider him a heckler who doesn't even understand what he's heckling at. I suspect that he found me impatient and, from where he stands, partisan. I freely admit that I am entirely out of patience with him, and he could probably point out responses where I failed to control my anger, especially after he started erasing key parts of pages just because he disagrees with them.
Ideally, I would like to come to some mutual agreement so we can both positively participate in making these pages better. Precisely because he is so fond of people like Chalmers and Block, he could add balance by reporting on their views. However, as things stand, his contributons are of negative net value.
It may well be that our personalities class and he's more reasonable when dealing with other people. It may well be that I'm particularly impatient with him because I perceive him as intentionally damaging my work. If so, then a third party might be able to resolve this.
If not, then it's going to come down to blocking one or both of us from changing these and related pages, at least until this calms down.
Hi there! Before coming to any conclusions on this case I would urge the arbitrators to consider that the changes in dispute are quite small. Furthermore I would ask them to consider that the changes that I made are supported by quotations from the literature and they are not my own ideas.
The argument between Alienus and myself has revolved around only a couple of points. In Consciousness Explained Dennett has a curious style, rather than arguing against established philosophers and ideas he invents the "Cartesian Theatre" argument, the "Orwellian" theory and the "Stalinesque" theory and argues against these. I have tried to make this plain in the text and Alienus has reverted my changes. The first point, Alienus' text:
"Dennett contrasts this with a Cartesian Theater model of consciousness, in which events suddenly appear on some sort of mental screen and then disappear as quickly. He provides numerous examples to show that events are necessarily analysed over a period of time rather than instantaneously."
was changed by myself on 28th November to:
"Dennett contrasts this with the straw man of a Cartesian Theater model of consciousness in which events suddenly appear on some sort of mental screen and then disappear instantaneously. Like Cartesius, Kant and many other philosophers Dennett concludes that conscious events require a duration in which they are analysed."
The reason that I introduced "straw man" is that this is the standard argument raised by philosophers against his ideas. It is important for students to understand that Dennett made up the term "Cartesian Theatre" himself and then proceeds to attack it. Alienus immediately reverted this change. I argued my case in Talk and re-inserted the points about straw men. Eventually I inserted a separate section, "Critical Responses to Multiple Drafts" to allow Alienus to write the description of the model in his own way. In this section I included one of many possible quotes to show that philosophers regard Dennett's arguments as arguments against theories of Dennett's own invention.
On 28th November I told Alienus about the Cartesian theatre article. This article was written by independent contributors and supported the contention that Dennett was indulging in straw man arguments. (see cartesian theatre changes Alienus immediately changed the article to support his own viewpoint!
I noticed that Alienus had created and redirected Cartesian materialism as if it were identical to "Cartesian theatre". I went to the article and put in place a correct definition of Cartesian Materialism. Alienus then changed it to Dennett's disparaging and incorrect definition: change to cartesian materialism
It is clear that we are discussing quite minor changes here. I have introduced points that are supported in the literature and have reproduced quotes and references to support these points. I would recommend any arbitrator to read the talk for multiple drafts where Alienus uses condescending and insulting language yet refuses to consider the source literature at all.
Now, you could ask me to cease contributing but should we allow information from published sources, such as the definition of Cartesian materialism and the "straw man" answer to Dennett, to be suppressed simply because one contributor feels these are POV? loxley 10:28, 20 December 2005 (UTC)
I don't think you're accurately explaining the issue in the first place. Of course, that's the problem in a nutshell: we don't even agree on what we disagree on.
The article on the multiple drafts model is supposed to give a sympathetic but balanced description of Dennett's theory. Dennett's starting point is his argument that all theories with a Cartesian theater necessarily boil down to Orwellian or Stalinesque interpretations, and yet there cannot be a principled basis for choosing one for the other. Of course, opponents are going to argue that this is not the case and will instead assert that Dennett is attacking a straw man. The article should certainly report this as relevant criticism. However, it must not state that his critics are right, as that would be unsympathetic and downright POV.
This is just one example of where I take issue with your changes. You systematically bias articles against Dennett's stance, which you neither agree with nor properly understand. Alienus 16:48, 21 December 2005 (UTC)
Right, well, thank you Alienus and Loxley for enumerating the issues at play in this case; I have a clearer understanding of what is happening in this matter now after having viewed this discourse.
First off, let me ask both Alienus and Loxley to avoid making personal attacks to each other, both here on the Mediation Cabal pages and anywhere else on Wikipedia. I would like to ask, most humbly, that both parties remove any personal attacks that they have made either here or anywhere else on Wikipedia against each other. From WP:NPA:
I think that, if this barrier was overcome and the issue of civility removed, more amicable discourse could take place on the substantative issues at play regarding this article - which are highly contentious, and thus require good communication in order to solve adequately.
What this basically appears to me to revolve around is, first and foremost, differing points of view causing conflict over article content. Secondly, it appears to also have a lot to do with interpretation and opinion based on the writer in question, Dennett, and his work. Alienus, in his dialogue here, has shown a considerable interest in defending Dennett's work, and likewise Loxley appears to have more of an interest in disparaging it. Both viewpoints are rather wide of the mark in this case, since of course Wikipedia:Cite sources states that all claims inserted into articles have to be sourced; likewise WP:NPOV states:
It strikes me that one issue here which has possibly caused the greatest contention is that each party clearly considers the other's actions on Wikipedia to be "wrong" since they do not agree with the other's viewpoint. It must be taken into consideration that all Wikipedia editors may have their own viewpoint, but as per WP:NPOV that shouldn't have anything to do with what goes into the article. I invite the participants in the dispute to cease making judgements on each other's beliefs, and concentrate solely on the editing in question.
Basically, if arguments both for and against Dennett's work exist, the argument as to which is "correct" or "valid" is entirely superfluous; since it seems clear a genuine debate exists outside of the Wikipedia article, the answer is that arguments from all sides should be included as quoted references from legitimate sources. Therefore, one solution to this issue would be that both Alienus and Loxley refrain from inserting any unsourced material into the articles in question, and the only items added are reported or direct quotes of these sources (referenced properly, of course). Then, the dispute would to a certain degree become entirely moot. It does appear to me that a lot of editing on both sides of this dispute are original research - interpretations of Dennett's work, e.g. the Cartesian theatre argument - and thus can be quite easily brought to a close.
If the material added through editing is not sourced, then it shouldn't be there. If it is sourced, and is a proper quote, then it should. Ultimately the whole content dispute vanishes under this premise. I invite the parties in this dispute to read Wikipedia:Cite sources.
Disputes of this character occur quite frequently on Wikipedia, especially on subjects of philosophy and epistemiology. The reason for this is that these subjects have a tendency to be rather subjective, since scientific "test and control" is difficult, if not impossible, to apply to solely ideological concepts. Because of this subjectivity, it is vital that all contributors avoid getting so emotionally involved and remember that Wikipedia is just a whole load of bytes that make up a document, just as Dennett's books are only paper with marks on them. I know this may sound juvenile and silly, but basically the world is not going to collapse based on arguments over philosophy, and I'd like to ask the participants to reflect as to exactly how important this dispute is in the grand scheme of life. There's little or no point in getting cut up and argumentative over all this.
I think probably a good way to bring this matter further to a close would be to appoint a neutral individual who doesn't have a particular side in the dispute to review the article and remove anything that appears to be original research (not adding or writing any new content, sourced or not). I won't appoint myself, since I need to remain impartial in my capacity as the mediator of this case; however, if the parties here are interested in this proposition, then I will arrange for this to occur.
I'd be grateful if the parties in this dispute, or even other people who aren't involved in the argument, would comment on the above in the "Response to mediator evaluation" section below, and we'll proceed from there. My apologies, incidentally, for the delay it has taken to analyse this case; it has taken me some time and effort to pick over the carcass of this argument.
-- NicholasTurnbull | (talk) 20:27, 27 December 2005 (UTC)
I'll address each of your sections in turn:
1) Ad hom: I agree regarding personal attacks. The reason I brought this up for mediation is that I felt our discussions had gotten past the point where they were productive, and had simply become hostile. As for removing existing conversations, I'm not sure I want to do this yet, if only because I don't see any easy way to disentangle the facts from the insults. Maybe a better time to do such a cleanup is after these pages stabilize a bit. Then we can just archive the old poison pen letters away.
2) NPOV: As much as you suggest later that philosophy just isn't that important, this is a topic that does have some bearing on the real world, and that may be why people like Loxely and I get so worked up about it. I will say that, on the matter of Dennett's theories, there is little middle ground. People who've been exposed to them either agree strongly or disagree just as strongly. In other words, an NPOV article would have to come from the cooperation of POV editors, not from the intervention of a truly neutral but deeply interested third party.
3) Sourced: Early in our exchanges, I switched to letting quotes by Dennett and his various supporters and detractors speak for me. This worked well, until Loxely started removing quotes he disliked. He removed one for being too positive! Around this point, communication broke down. If it happens again, I will seek arbitration and have him removed from these pages for as long as it takes. Now, as for everything being sourced, of course, but we can't reproduce entire books here, so there's a need for neutral and accurate summaries. These summaries cannot praise with faint damns, twist the meaning or otherwise poison the well.
4) Interpretation: It sometimes surprises me, but people actually expect Wikipedia to have accurate information. They come here looking for the facts, and I want them to find only the facts when it comes to these issues. I am unhappy with the idea that innocent people are being biased against Dennett due to Loxley's hatred of the man.
5) Third Party: Sure, bring it on. With two people, it's too easy for it to simply become a reversion war.
5) Input: Though I don't necessarily agree with all your suggestions, I do want to thank you for taking the time to try to resolve this.
Alienus 03:08, 28 December 2005 (UTC)
Follow-up: Just want to point out that Loxely's own responses have confirmed my accusations regarding his bias. Alienus 21:31, 28 December 2005 (UTC)
Overall my changes have been fairly limited and specific. I am rather surprised that they have stirred up such animosity.
On the question of sources, I hope I have sourced all my contributions. Please could you point out where this is not the case and I will remove the offending parts. It should be noted that I contributed most of the quotations and references in the Multiple Drafts article.
Contrary to the accusations in this Cabal, I am not anti-Dennett and enjoy the interplay of ideas in philosophy as a pursuit that is independent of their veracity. I have wanted to include some insight into the standard critique of Multiple Drafts (in a separate section), have tried to keep the Cartesian materialism article neutral and sourced from authors other than Dennett and have corrected the Cartesian theatre article to show that Dennett has provided an attack on Cartesian materialism that is not the standard regress approach.
Surprisingly, the articles look fairly well-balanced as they stand although the regress based introduction to the cartesian theatre article is probably superfluous.
I am still rather unhappy about comparing Cartesian materialist descriptions to Joseph Stalin's show trials. It would be more encyclopedic to say that "Dennett invented the Stalinesque interpretation/Orwellian interpretation to explain his analysis of Cartesian materialism", this is factual and does not involve Wikipedia in the passive support of Dennett's pejorative method of argument.
I also find the "criticisms" section of Multiple Drafts does not benefit from the quote by Korb or the rather saccharin and unsupported testimonial for Dennett's ideas.
The consciousness article is more problematical. Which philosophers should be prominent in this article? Philosophers such as Berkeley, Locke, Descartes, Kant and Reid are obviously famous and have stood the test of time. Chalmers and Block are fairly main-stream. Block is a superb collater and summariser so is scarcely contentious and can be used as an entry point to the work of others. Had it not been for the "hard problem" Chalmers might not have been so widely known or well respected but "the hard problem" crystalises an important issue. Dennett is much nearer the edge however. Notice that the article does not dwell on Whitehead, Russell, Husserl, Broad, Wittgenstein etc., all of whom have stood the test of time - if it does not mention Whitehead should it really pay much attention to Dennett or Spencer-Brown or Ken Wilber?
I am happy for a third party to review the articles. loxley 16:44, 28 December 2005 (UTC)
I am not a philosopher, nor an expert on consciousness, but rather an "interested layman". I am putting some comments on the talk pages for some of the disputed articles (including Talk:Cartesian theater and Talk:Cartesian materialism) that I hope might be helpful to improving the articles in ways that all parties might appreciate. Gwimpey 06:16, 29 December 2005 (UTC)
Look, I am inclined to give up, I have been insulted, patronised, taken to this cabal for no reason other than trying to defend the impartiality of Wikipedia. Here we have someone who seems to have only read one book by Dennett and for some strange reason is insisting that Dennett's views are of paramount importance and must be given pride of place in all related articles. In the Cartesian materialism article Dennett is now portrayed as the gold standard for defining this term when he is its chief detractor. In the consciousness article Dennett is being included on the same level as Descartes or Kant. I know I should be bothered, and I have been bothered but in the absence of any support should I continue to be bothered? loxley 00:29, 3 January 2006 (UTC)
When people look up Cartesian materialism in Wikipedia they want a concise definition, they do not want to arrive in the middle of an argument due to Dennett. The article on Cartesian materialism, where Dennett's contribution is in a "criticisms" section, allows readers to read three impartial definitions followed by Dennett's own, unique, critical definition. Why do you want Dennett's critique as a definition of this idea? Who does it benefit? Is it helping Wikipedia?
The clear definition of cartesian materialism followed by Dennett's critique helps readers to understand the eliminativist position which "is largely concerned with moving from a brain-centered view of the mind to a view of the mind as occuring in the brain/body/environment nexus..." ( http://thm.askee.net/articles/cartesian-cogn.pdf) loxley 19:53, 3 January 2006 (UTC)
You accuse me of retailing a POV but I introduced all the reference material and source data into both the Multiple Drafts and Cartesian Materialism articles. You accuse me of vandalism but I created both of these articles and have, by and large, been happy for them to be changed. You accuse me of not understanding Dennett or the field but you have introduced no knowledge of any text except "Consciousness explained".
You will not deal with anything specifically but respond to any points with name calling, text reversions and further questions. You engage in edit wars with the announcement that it is the other people who are engaging in an edit war. You strike first by taking those who are opposing your campaigns to Cabals etc. In fact you represent a fascinating example of a real problem for an open publication like Wikipedia. I think we should try to push this through to other discussion forums. loxley 10:51, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
I also think time has shown that arguing with you is pointless. Instead, I'll let my record speak for me. Worse, I'll let yours speak for you. I think I come out far better in this exchange. Alienus 11:11, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
We are not going anywhere so I have requested arbitration. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Requests_for_arbitration#Cartesian_materialism
Alienus, I introduced all of the references into the talk and articles for both the Multiple Drafts and Cartesian materialism. I also started both the Multiple Drafts and Cartesian materialism articles (changing cartesian materialism from a redirect to Dennett's Cartesian theater) Please refrain from claiming that you introduced these sources. loxley 19:16, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
I will try to be specific. The Cartesian materialism article is being edited by Alienus so that it is being introduced according to the viewpoint of a particular philosopher: Daniel Dennett. In particular the introductory paragraph has been changed to make Cartesian materialism sound like cartesian dualism and the following two paragraphs have been added:
"A characteristic feature of Cartesian dualism is that, although processing occurs in various parts of the brain, conciousness is isolated in a specific spot. Descartes wrote that the "[pineal] gland is the principal seat of the soul, and the place in which all our thoughts are formed". Cartesian materalists reject these details but generally maintain the existence of a central location.
In this tradition, Dennett defines Cartesian materialism as "the view that there is a crucial finish line or boundary somewhere in the brain, marking a place where the order of arrival equals the order of "presentation" in experience because what happens there is what you are conscious of. (p.107) Dennett considers Cartesian materialism obsolete but endemic, saying it is "the view that nobody espouses but almost everybody tends to think in terms of", such as when they speak of "entering consciousness" or "the moment of awareness"."
The first paragraph is an original contribution by Alienus: he does not produce any source to show that Cartesian materialists maintain the existence of a central location. The only references I can find show that Cartesian materialists hold the general view that the mind is in the brain.
The second paragraph uses a definition given by Daniel Dennett, the principle opponent of Cartesian materialism. This definition is peculiar to Dennett and has been developed specifically to support his Multiple drafts theory of consciousness. It is like introducing an article on Jesus Christ with a view such as "Christ was a mythical figure developed by the Roman Empire in an attempt to regulate the psychology and religious practice of the population" - these points might all be defended individually but it makes a nonsense of an impartial article. Specifically, Dennett introduces a "crucial finish line" so implies presentism and the text says that cartesian materialism is "obsolete but endemic". Cartesian materialists are not necessarily presentists and "obsolete but endemic" is entirely pejorative.
I would like to see the first paragraph removed entirely because it is original work. I would like to see the second paragraph placed later in the article and labelled with a warning that this is a definition supplied by the principle opponent of Cartesian materialism. A fair presentation can be seen at http://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Cartesian_materialism&oldid=33761410 . loxley 11:50, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
We should develop the article from the viewpoint of the reader. Introducing Dennett's criticisms as if they are the definition of Cartesian Materialism confuses the entire issue. By undermining the definition of Cartesian Materialism from the outset the article just becomes the toy of a philosophical debate rather than an encyclopedia article. When readers turn to the Cartesian materialism article they want to know about Cartesian materialism, not how wonderful Alienus thinks Dennett might be. loxley 09:41, 5 January 2006 (UTC)
I will not repeat myself. Go to the right talk page and discuss it there. Alienus 09:54, 5 January 2006 (UTC)
Smile and wave to the cameras. It's not like you're genuinely talking about how to improve this page. You're just posing for the arbitrators. In the end, they'll have to decide who stays and who goes. Let's see if they do the right thing. Alienus 13:13, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
An arbitration case has been made by one or more of the parties in this dispute. As a consequence, the Mediation Cabal is not capable of continuing to handle this case from now on, since mediation does not encompass the realms of disciplinary matters. As a consequence, this recommendation will be the last mediation action to take place here. Should the arbitration case be rejected, this case may be reopened on request.
Since a point of agreement between the two of you was to get a neutral third person to evaluate the article material based, I will arrange for this to occur even though arbitration has already been requested. I think this may go some way towards helping to at least reduce the overall content warring present on this article.
I have already made the recommendations to you both that you refrain from incivility towards one another. The discourse above continues to show signs of ad hominem insults, which are not conducive towards productive editing. I make a final request to you both that you either cease the mutual incivility, or refrain from discussing the matter with each other, since if anything the discourse appears to be making the antagonism worse.
As I mentioned in my initial evaluation, ultimately the content dispute appears to boil down to a matter of interpretation and viewpoint, which should not exist as per Wikipedia:Neutral point of view and Wikipedia:Cite sources. I am confident that if all claims made were directly referenced to their point of origin and no further information was to be included because of one of you deciding that an idea was misrepresented or underrepresented, the dispute would vanish. Basically, this is a case where the emotional involvement of the two participants has overruled editorial judgement and the consequent dispute has devolved into merely an attempt to score points between the two parties.
It appears to me that Alienus is conducting actions which essentially amount to bullying towards Loxley, and is being very forceful in making his/her point both in dialogue and on the articles. Alienus is politely requested to please desist from doing this.
I sincerely apologise for my assumption that Loxley's actions were anti-Dennett; that was merely my view based on a cursory examination of the editing in question. I did not mean to accuse you of anything, indeed, I did believe that you genuinely held this view yourself.
Due to the arbitration case mentioned above, and an unwillingness to maintain reasonable editorial discussion on the matter, it is clear that this matter has gone beyond the scope of mediation and the Mediation Cabal can no longer mediate this case. However, if any further assistance or intervention is required by either party they may request it here and a mediator will assist them outside of this mediation case.
I would also like to apologise to both parties for the delay experienced throughout this case; alas, the Mediation Cabal is somewhat short of mediators' time (although more recently this has improved) and as a consequence this case was rather neglected due to its complexity.
The Mediation Cabal thanks the participants for their time and effort in this matter.
Alienus 13:09, 6 December 2005 (UTC)
It appears that Loxley strongly supports one warring camp of philosophers who disagree with Dennett, so his changes are largely focused on defining Dennett as negatively as possible. Besides the excess POV, he does not possess a clear understanding of Dennett's work, so he's also making numerous factual errors. I've done my best to merge in whatever good parts he's added, clarify things that could be misunderstood and generally put together better pages. His counter-changes started off as reasonable if flawed, but have progressed to simple vandalism.
I've tried to discuss this with him, but it has not been productive. From my point of view, he's been argumentative, unresponsive and very deeply biased. I've lost respect for him, and now just consider him a heckler who doesn't even understand what he's heckling at. I suspect that he found me impatient and, from where he stands, partisan. I freely admit that I am entirely out of patience with him, and he could probably point out responses where I failed to control my anger, especially after he started erasing key parts of pages just because he disagrees with them.
Ideally, I would like to come to some mutual agreement so we can both positively participate in making these pages better. Precisely because he is so fond of people like Chalmers and Block, he could add balance by reporting on their views. However, as things stand, his contributons are of negative net value.
It may well be that our personalities class and he's more reasonable when dealing with other people. It may well be that I'm particularly impatient with him because I perceive him as intentionally damaging my work. If so, then a third party might be able to resolve this.
If not, then it's going to come down to blocking one or both of us from changing these and related pages, at least until this calms down.
Hi there! Before coming to any conclusions on this case I would urge the arbitrators to consider that the changes in dispute are quite small. Furthermore I would ask them to consider that the changes that I made are supported by quotations from the literature and they are not my own ideas.
The argument between Alienus and myself has revolved around only a couple of points. In Consciousness Explained Dennett has a curious style, rather than arguing against established philosophers and ideas he invents the "Cartesian Theatre" argument, the "Orwellian" theory and the "Stalinesque" theory and argues against these. I have tried to make this plain in the text and Alienus has reverted my changes. The first point, Alienus' text:
"Dennett contrasts this with a Cartesian Theater model of consciousness, in which events suddenly appear on some sort of mental screen and then disappear as quickly. He provides numerous examples to show that events are necessarily analysed over a period of time rather than instantaneously."
was changed by myself on 28th November to:
"Dennett contrasts this with the straw man of a Cartesian Theater model of consciousness in which events suddenly appear on some sort of mental screen and then disappear instantaneously. Like Cartesius, Kant and many other philosophers Dennett concludes that conscious events require a duration in which they are analysed."
The reason that I introduced "straw man" is that this is the standard argument raised by philosophers against his ideas. It is important for students to understand that Dennett made up the term "Cartesian Theatre" himself and then proceeds to attack it. Alienus immediately reverted this change. I argued my case in Talk and re-inserted the points about straw men. Eventually I inserted a separate section, "Critical Responses to Multiple Drafts" to allow Alienus to write the description of the model in his own way. In this section I included one of many possible quotes to show that philosophers regard Dennett's arguments as arguments against theories of Dennett's own invention.
On 28th November I told Alienus about the Cartesian theatre article. This article was written by independent contributors and supported the contention that Dennett was indulging in straw man arguments. (see cartesian theatre changes Alienus immediately changed the article to support his own viewpoint!
I noticed that Alienus had created and redirected Cartesian materialism as if it were identical to "Cartesian theatre". I went to the article and put in place a correct definition of Cartesian Materialism. Alienus then changed it to Dennett's disparaging and incorrect definition: change to cartesian materialism
It is clear that we are discussing quite minor changes here. I have introduced points that are supported in the literature and have reproduced quotes and references to support these points. I would recommend any arbitrator to read the talk for multiple drafts where Alienus uses condescending and insulting language yet refuses to consider the source literature at all.
Now, you could ask me to cease contributing but should we allow information from published sources, such as the definition of Cartesian materialism and the "straw man" answer to Dennett, to be suppressed simply because one contributor feels these are POV? loxley 10:28, 20 December 2005 (UTC)
I don't think you're accurately explaining the issue in the first place. Of course, that's the problem in a nutshell: we don't even agree on what we disagree on.
The article on the multiple drafts model is supposed to give a sympathetic but balanced description of Dennett's theory. Dennett's starting point is his argument that all theories with a Cartesian theater necessarily boil down to Orwellian or Stalinesque interpretations, and yet there cannot be a principled basis for choosing one for the other. Of course, opponents are going to argue that this is not the case and will instead assert that Dennett is attacking a straw man. The article should certainly report this as relevant criticism. However, it must not state that his critics are right, as that would be unsympathetic and downright POV.
This is just one example of where I take issue with your changes. You systematically bias articles against Dennett's stance, which you neither agree with nor properly understand. Alienus 16:48, 21 December 2005 (UTC)
Right, well, thank you Alienus and Loxley for enumerating the issues at play in this case; I have a clearer understanding of what is happening in this matter now after having viewed this discourse.
First off, let me ask both Alienus and Loxley to avoid making personal attacks to each other, both here on the Mediation Cabal pages and anywhere else on Wikipedia. I would like to ask, most humbly, that both parties remove any personal attacks that they have made either here or anywhere else on Wikipedia against each other. From WP:NPA:
I think that, if this barrier was overcome and the issue of civility removed, more amicable discourse could take place on the substantative issues at play regarding this article - which are highly contentious, and thus require good communication in order to solve adequately.
What this basically appears to me to revolve around is, first and foremost, differing points of view causing conflict over article content. Secondly, it appears to also have a lot to do with interpretation and opinion based on the writer in question, Dennett, and his work. Alienus, in his dialogue here, has shown a considerable interest in defending Dennett's work, and likewise Loxley appears to have more of an interest in disparaging it. Both viewpoints are rather wide of the mark in this case, since of course Wikipedia:Cite sources states that all claims inserted into articles have to be sourced; likewise WP:NPOV states:
It strikes me that one issue here which has possibly caused the greatest contention is that each party clearly considers the other's actions on Wikipedia to be "wrong" since they do not agree with the other's viewpoint. It must be taken into consideration that all Wikipedia editors may have their own viewpoint, but as per WP:NPOV that shouldn't have anything to do with what goes into the article. I invite the participants in the dispute to cease making judgements on each other's beliefs, and concentrate solely on the editing in question.
Basically, if arguments both for and against Dennett's work exist, the argument as to which is "correct" or "valid" is entirely superfluous; since it seems clear a genuine debate exists outside of the Wikipedia article, the answer is that arguments from all sides should be included as quoted references from legitimate sources. Therefore, one solution to this issue would be that both Alienus and Loxley refrain from inserting any unsourced material into the articles in question, and the only items added are reported or direct quotes of these sources (referenced properly, of course). Then, the dispute would to a certain degree become entirely moot. It does appear to me that a lot of editing on both sides of this dispute are original research - interpretations of Dennett's work, e.g. the Cartesian theatre argument - and thus can be quite easily brought to a close.
If the material added through editing is not sourced, then it shouldn't be there. If it is sourced, and is a proper quote, then it should. Ultimately the whole content dispute vanishes under this premise. I invite the parties in this dispute to read Wikipedia:Cite sources.
Disputes of this character occur quite frequently on Wikipedia, especially on subjects of philosophy and epistemiology. The reason for this is that these subjects have a tendency to be rather subjective, since scientific "test and control" is difficult, if not impossible, to apply to solely ideological concepts. Because of this subjectivity, it is vital that all contributors avoid getting so emotionally involved and remember that Wikipedia is just a whole load of bytes that make up a document, just as Dennett's books are only paper with marks on them. I know this may sound juvenile and silly, but basically the world is not going to collapse based on arguments over philosophy, and I'd like to ask the participants to reflect as to exactly how important this dispute is in the grand scheme of life. There's little or no point in getting cut up and argumentative over all this.
I think probably a good way to bring this matter further to a close would be to appoint a neutral individual who doesn't have a particular side in the dispute to review the article and remove anything that appears to be original research (not adding or writing any new content, sourced or not). I won't appoint myself, since I need to remain impartial in my capacity as the mediator of this case; however, if the parties here are interested in this proposition, then I will arrange for this to occur.
I'd be grateful if the parties in this dispute, or even other people who aren't involved in the argument, would comment on the above in the "Response to mediator evaluation" section below, and we'll proceed from there. My apologies, incidentally, for the delay it has taken to analyse this case; it has taken me some time and effort to pick over the carcass of this argument.
-- NicholasTurnbull | (talk) 20:27, 27 December 2005 (UTC)
I'll address each of your sections in turn:
1) Ad hom: I agree regarding personal attacks. The reason I brought this up for mediation is that I felt our discussions had gotten past the point where they were productive, and had simply become hostile. As for removing existing conversations, I'm not sure I want to do this yet, if only because I don't see any easy way to disentangle the facts from the insults. Maybe a better time to do such a cleanup is after these pages stabilize a bit. Then we can just archive the old poison pen letters away.
2) NPOV: As much as you suggest later that philosophy just isn't that important, this is a topic that does have some bearing on the real world, and that may be why people like Loxely and I get so worked up about it. I will say that, on the matter of Dennett's theories, there is little middle ground. People who've been exposed to them either agree strongly or disagree just as strongly. In other words, an NPOV article would have to come from the cooperation of POV editors, not from the intervention of a truly neutral but deeply interested third party.
3) Sourced: Early in our exchanges, I switched to letting quotes by Dennett and his various supporters and detractors speak for me. This worked well, until Loxely started removing quotes he disliked. He removed one for being too positive! Around this point, communication broke down. If it happens again, I will seek arbitration and have him removed from these pages for as long as it takes. Now, as for everything being sourced, of course, but we can't reproduce entire books here, so there's a need for neutral and accurate summaries. These summaries cannot praise with faint damns, twist the meaning or otherwise poison the well.
4) Interpretation: It sometimes surprises me, but people actually expect Wikipedia to have accurate information. They come here looking for the facts, and I want them to find only the facts when it comes to these issues. I am unhappy with the idea that innocent people are being biased against Dennett due to Loxley's hatred of the man.
5) Third Party: Sure, bring it on. With two people, it's too easy for it to simply become a reversion war.
5) Input: Though I don't necessarily agree with all your suggestions, I do want to thank you for taking the time to try to resolve this.
Alienus 03:08, 28 December 2005 (UTC)
Follow-up: Just want to point out that Loxely's own responses have confirmed my accusations regarding his bias. Alienus 21:31, 28 December 2005 (UTC)
Overall my changes have been fairly limited and specific. I am rather surprised that they have stirred up such animosity.
On the question of sources, I hope I have sourced all my contributions. Please could you point out where this is not the case and I will remove the offending parts. It should be noted that I contributed most of the quotations and references in the Multiple Drafts article.
Contrary to the accusations in this Cabal, I am not anti-Dennett and enjoy the interplay of ideas in philosophy as a pursuit that is independent of their veracity. I have wanted to include some insight into the standard critique of Multiple Drafts (in a separate section), have tried to keep the Cartesian materialism article neutral and sourced from authors other than Dennett and have corrected the Cartesian theatre article to show that Dennett has provided an attack on Cartesian materialism that is not the standard regress approach.
Surprisingly, the articles look fairly well-balanced as they stand although the regress based introduction to the cartesian theatre article is probably superfluous.
I am still rather unhappy about comparing Cartesian materialist descriptions to Joseph Stalin's show trials. It would be more encyclopedic to say that "Dennett invented the Stalinesque interpretation/Orwellian interpretation to explain his analysis of Cartesian materialism", this is factual and does not involve Wikipedia in the passive support of Dennett's pejorative method of argument.
I also find the "criticisms" section of Multiple Drafts does not benefit from the quote by Korb or the rather saccharin and unsupported testimonial for Dennett's ideas.
The consciousness article is more problematical. Which philosophers should be prominent in this article? Philosophers such as Berkeley, Locke, Descartes, Kant and Reid are obviously famous and have stood the test of time. Chalmers and Block are fairly main-stream. Block is a superb collater and summariser so is scarcely contentious and can be used as an entry point to the work of others. Had it not been for the "hard problem" Chalmers might not have been so widely known or well respected but "the hard problem" crystalises an important issue. Dennett is much nearer the edge however. Notice that the article does not dwell on Whitehead, Russell, Husserl, Broad, Wittgenstein etc., all of whom have stood the test of time - if it does not mention Whitehead should it really pay much attention to Dennett or Spencer-Brown or Ken Wilber?
I am happy for a third party to review the articles. loxley 16:44, 28 December 2005 (UTC)
I am not a philosopher, nor an expert on consciousness, but rather an "interested layman". I am putting some comments on the talk pages for some of the disputed articles (including Talk:Cartesian theater and Talk:Cartesian materialism) that I hope might be helpful to improving the articles in ways that all parties might appreciate. Gwimpey 06:16, 29 December 2005 (UTC)
Look, I am inclined to give up, I have been insulted, patronised, taken to this cabal for no reason other than trying to defend the impartiality of Wikipedia. Here we have someone who seems to have only read one book by Dennett and for some strange reason is insisting that Dennett's views are of paramount importance and must be given pride of place in all related articles. In the Cartesian materialism article Dennett is now portrayed as the gold standard for defining this term when he is its chief detractor. In the consciousness article Dennett is being included on the same level as Descartes or Kant. I know I should be bothered, and I have been bothered but in the absence of any support should I continue to be bothered? loxley 00:29, 3 January 2006 (UTC)
When people look up Cartesian materialism in Wikipedia they want a concise definition, they do not want to arrive in the middle of an argument due to Dennett. The article on Cartesian materialism, where Dennett's contribution is in a "criticisms" section, allows readers to read three impartial definitions followed by Dennett's own, unique, critical definition. Why do you want Dennett's critique as a definition of this idea? Who does it benefit? Is it helping Wikipedia?
The clear definition of cartesian materialism followed by Dennett's critique helps readers to understand the eliminativist position which "is largely concerned with moving from a brain-centered view of the mind to a view of the mind as occuring in the brain/body/environment nexus..." ( http://thm.askee.net/articles/cartesian-cogn.pdf) loxley 19:53, 3 January 2006 (UTC)
You accuse me of retailing a POV but I introduced all the reference material and source data into both the Multiple Drafts and Cartesian Materialism articles. You accuse me of vandalism but I created both of these articles and have, by and large, been happy for them to be changed. You accuse me of not understanding Dennett or the field but you have introduced no knowledge of any text except "Consciousness explained".
You will not deal with anything specifically but respond to any points with name calling, text reversions and further questions. You engage in edit wars with the announcement that it is the other people who are engaging in an edit war. You strike first by taking those who are opposing your campaigns to Cabals etc. In fact you represent a fascinating example of a real problem for an open publication like Wikipedia. I think we should try to push this through to other discussion forums. loxley 10:51, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
I also think time has shown that arguing with you is pointless. Instead, I'll let my record speak for me. Worse, I'll let yours speak for you. I think I come out far better in this exchange. Alienus 11:11, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
We are not going anywhere so I have requested arbitration. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Requests_for_arbitration#Cartesian_materialism
Alienus, I introduced all of the references into the talk and articles for both the Multiple Drafts and Cartesian materialism. I also started both the Multiple Drafts and Cartesian materialism articles (changing cartesian materialism from a redirect to Dennett's Cartesian theater) Please refrain from claiming that you introduced these sources. loxley 19:16, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
I will try to be specific. The Cartesian materialism article is being edited by Alienus so that it is being introduced according to the viewpoint of a particular philosopher: Daniel Dennett. In particular the introductory paragraph has been changed to make Cartesian materialism sound like cartesian dualism and the following two paragraphs have been added:
"A characteristic feature of Cartesian dualism is that, although processing occurs in various parts of the brain, conciousness is isolated in a specific spot. Descartes wrote that the "[pineal] gland is the principal seat of the soul, and the place in which all our thoughts are formed". Cartesian materalists reject these details but generally maintain the existence of a central location.
In this tradition, Dennett defines Cartesian materialism as "the view that there is a crucial finish line or boundary somewhere in the brain, marking a place where the order of arrival equals the order of "presentation" in experience because what happens there is what you are conscious of. (p.107) Dennett considers Cartesian materialism obsolete but endemic, saying it is "the view that nobody espouses but almost everybody tends to think in terms of", such as when they speak of "entering consciousness" or "the moment of awareness"."
The first paragraph is an original contribution by Alienus: he does not produce any source to show that Cartesian materialists maintain the existence of a central location. The only references I can find show that Cartesian materialists hold the general view that the mind is in the brain.
The second paragraph uses a definition given by Daniel Dennett, the principle opponent of Cartesian materialism. This definition is peculiar to Dennett and has been developed specifically to support his Multiple drafts theory of consciousness. It is like introducing an article on Jesus Christ with a view such as "Christ was a mythical figure developed by the Roman Empire in an attempt to regulate the psychology and religious practice of the population" - these points might all be defended individually but it makes a nonsense of an impartial article. Specifically, Dennett introduces a "crucial finish line" so implies presentism and the text says that cartesian materialism is "obsolete but endemic". Cartesian materialists are not necessarily presentists and "obsolete but endemic" is entirely pejorative.
I would like to see the first paragraph removed entirely because it is original work. I would like to see the second paragraph placed later in the article and labelled with a warning that this is a definition supplied by the principle opponent of Cartesian materialism. A fair presentation can be seen at http://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Cartesian_materialism&oldid=33761410 . loxley 11:50, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
We should develop the article from the viewpoint of the reader. Introducing Dennett's criticisms as if they are the definition of Cartesian Materialism confuses the entire issue. By undermining the definition of Cartesian Materialism from the outset the article just becomes the toy of a philosophical debate rather than an encyclopedia article. When readers turn to the Cartesian materialism article they want to know about Cartesian materialism, not how wonderful Alienus thinks Dennett might be. loxley 09:41, 5 January 2006 (UTC)
I will not repeat myself. Go to the right talk page and discuss it there. Alienus 09:54, 5 January 2006 (UTC)
Smile and wave to the cameras. It's not like you're genuinely talking about how to improve this page. You're just posing for the arbitrators. In the end, they'll have to decide who stays and who goes. Let's see if they do the right thing. Alienus 13:13, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
An arbitration case has been made by one or more of the parties in this dispute. As a consequence, the Mediation Cabal is not capable of continuing to handle this case from now on, since mediation does not encompass the realms of disciplinary matters. As a consequence, this recommendation will be the last mediation action to take place here. Should the arbitration case be rejected, this case may be reopened on request.
Since a point of agreement between the two of you was to get a neutral third person to evaluate the article material based, I will arrange for this to occur even though arbitration has already been requested. I think this may go some way towards helping to at least reduce the overall content warring present on this article.
I have already made the recommendations to you both that you refrain from incivility towards one another. The discourse above continues to show signs of ad hominem insults, which are not conducive towards productive editing. I make a final request to you both that you either cease the mutual incivility, or refrain from discussing the matter with each other, since if anything the discourse appears to be making the antagonism worse.
As I mentioned in my initial evaluation, ultimately the content dispute appears to boil down to a matter of interpretation and viewpoint, which should not exist as per Wikipedia:Neutral point of view and Wikipedia:Cite sources. I am confident that if all claims made were directly referenced to their point of origin and no further information was to be included because of one of you deciding that an idea was misrepresented or underrepresented, the dispute would vanish. Basically, this is a case where the emotional involvement of the two participants has overruled editorial judgement and the consequent dispute has devolved into merely an attempt to score points between the two parties.
It appears to me that Alienus is conducting actions which essentially amount to bullying towards Loxley, and is being very forceful in making his/her point both in dialogue and on the articles. Alienus is politely requested to please desist from doing this.
I sincerely apologise for my assumption that Loxley's actions were anti-Dennett; that was merely my view based on a cursory examination of the editing in question. I did not mean to accuse you of anything, indeed, I did believe that you genuinely held this view yourself.
Due to the arbitration case mentioned above, and an unwillingness to maintain reasonable editorial discussion on the matter, it is clear that this matter has gone beyond the scope of mediation and the Mediation Cabal can no longer mediate this case. However, if any further assistance or intervention is required by either party they may request it here and a mediator will assist them outside of this mediation case.
I would also like to apologise to both parties for the delay experienced throughout this case; alas, the Mediation Cabal is somewhat short of mediators' time (although more recently this has improved) and as a consequence this case was rather neglected due to its complexity.
The Mediation Cabal thanks the participants for their time and effort in this matter.